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#451 to #450
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tittylovin (10/22/2015) [-] I didn't mention anything about her being OOC, just how you were approaching getting that point across.
Also spike bubbles annoy me because it's sometimes difficult to tell who is speaking. Also at this point women would be bringing up other things in an argument, some personal insults.
Also spike bubbles annoy me because it's sometimes difficult to tell who is speaking. Also at this point women would be bringing up other things in an argument, some personal insults.
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tittylovin (10/22/2015) [-] That's better, but that face tho
Why IS it so hard for amateurs to replicate the style of existing cartoons? It makes finding good r34 such a chore. Also they're all obsessed with futa, and genderbending. Creepy as **** , though I guess when you're looking for cartoon porn you're already sliding down the slippery slope to madness.
Why IS it so hard for amateurs to replicate the style of existing cartoons? It makes finding good r34 such a chore. Also they're all obsessed with futa, and genderbending. Creepy as **** , though I guess when you're looking for cartoon porn you're already sliding down the slippery slope to madness.
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tittylovin (10/22/2015) [-] Naw I get what you're saying. This is your stuff? Post more it's good. Not great, but good.
Asami a qt
Asami a qt
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tittylovin (10/22/2015) [-] >Is not a problem. I'm used to deal with idiots
So she's Russian now? Also there's no way someone would invest their ENTIRE fortune into one thing.
Also crossovers are cringeworthy too. Also I have no idea rwyb is but I wanna guess Red White Yellow Black?
So she's Russian now? Also there's no way someone would invest their ENTIRE fortune into one thing.
Also crossovers are cringeworthy too. Also I have no idea rwyb is but I wanna guess Red White Yellow Black?
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murrlogic (10/22/2015) [-] Nah. The guy who drew this is some South America so his english isn't perfect.
The story is Winter made a huge fortune by creating weapons of mass destruction and selling them to terrorists who didn't turn out to be terrorists in her eyes. She was too busy eyeballing the fat stacks of cash she got for the weapons she sold
So now she needs to hide all her money so what better way to hide money WITHIN MORE MONEY so she is stashing all her cash with Asami's. She wants to lump their fortunes together and become untouchable.
The story is Winter made a huge fortune by creating weapons of mass destruction and selling them to terrorists who didn't turn out to be terrorists in her eyes. She was too busy eyeballing the fat stacks of cash she got for the weapons she sold
So now she needs to hide all her money so what better way to hide money WITHIN MORE MONEY so she is stashing all her cash with Asami's. She wants to lump their fortunes together and become untouchable.
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tittylovin (10/22/2015) [-] Good luck with that. I have no goddamn clue why you're sharing this with me, but I hope you've enjoyed my worthless criticism.
Definitely room for improvement, it's got that deviant art vibe. But I've seen way worse. Ye gods I have seen some **** .
Definitely room for improvement, it's got that deviant art vibe. But I've seen way worse. Ye gods I have seen some **** .
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tittylovin (10/22/2015) [-] Do it. I'm game as long as you don't mind me ******** all over your work.
In this one, Korra's eyes are dead looking and her mouth doesn't look like she's talking. Usually when Annie May grills make that face they're excited to see someone.
Also the dialogue sucks, at least the bits I bothered to read. Comics are a visual format, and having Korra say "this is a characters personality trait beep boop I am a robot" is an example of telling and not showing. Essentially everything about Korra is wrong.
In this one, Korra's eyes are dead looking and her mouth doesn't look like she's talking. Usually when Annie May grills make that face they're excited to see someone.
Also the dialogue sucks, at least the bits I bothered to read. Comics are a visual format, and having Korra say "this is a characters personality trait beep boop I am a robot" is an example of telling and not showing. Essentially everything about Korra is wrong.
