Yeah, no problem. What do you think? Should I continue this crap? So far almost everyone likes it and the people who don't only dislike the fact that it's about zombies, whcih I could easily change.

well i find the amount of effort you've put into this extrodinary, got thumb limit half way through.

my only change would be to not insult the reader as much, but hey that's your thing not mine so keep it up.

and if you are willing to do this, don't half ass it, see this story, stories, whatever, through to the end.

As for the insults, I've always felt that games need to tell the player that they fucked up. Like the way in Mortal Kombat 9 Shao Kahn occasionally stops fighting you just to tell you how much you suck. I'll try to reduce the insults a bit, but they're staying.

Extrodinary ammount of effort? It was written in less that 2 hours out of pure boredom. And relax, I never halfass things, especially when I'm doing them for fun.

i write convos myself, finding where to take the story can be a bit difficult at times.

as well i don't type quickly so the fact that you've done this much is impressive.

I spend 8 hours a day online (sleep is for the weak), so it's not much of a surprise that I type fast. The only problem is that, because of that speed, I occasionally make some spelling mistakes and I'm too lazy to do a spellcheck.

As for taking the story somewhere, that's incredibly easy. The cespool of blood, porn and toxic waste I call a brain can be surprisingly producive. Heck, I once came up with a 200 word story about how I took a shit while I was in the bathroom.

200?

i wrote ten pages for a paragraph assignment just to fuck with a teacher.

was all very well written got an 'A+' and a teacher note that said

"seriously?!"

shit was cash.

XD Awesome. Besides, I came up with a 200 word story in 5 minutes - that's a personal best. How many stories have you seen about someone taking a shit?

i've done three posts on the thread about shit's i've taken, someone wrote a poem about dropping the deuce, and i had a semester of health where we talked about the digestive system so we had to watch an account of the whole thing.

so four written works a video and if we count yours...

what?

Glad to help. Just doing my job.

I don't see why you're being a douchebag right now.

To put it simply, I'm a douchebag most of the time. I just choose not to be in the thread. Still, I do not approve of posting pics of your ass............ in NSFW or otherwise. Besides, you could always just delete my comment. You're OP, for fucks sake! If you're going to be a faggot you may as well act like one.

I don't even care if they know I am actually a guy.

I think it's funny.

To be honest, I wasn't trying to ruin the joke. Just wanted to see that guys reaction.

HFW

Pretty good for a first try, but I'd add some pauses between the words if I were you. Press F5 in flash to add a blank frame - it's pretty much a continuation of the last frame.