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#217
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nonnotitiapono (04/15/2012) [-] hey man, been a long time since ive heard from you. howve you been?
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mycatthenazi (04/07/2012) [-] MOTHERFUCKING LOBSTERCOCK
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joshkroger (04/06/2012) [-] mfw I read your username as sam wichwon instead of samwich won. Just sayin I know a guy named sam wishon so I'm a bit curious
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N. Korean citizen (03/31/2012) [-]
Post that shit again and you're dead too.
I will go to Canada for a kill, don't think I won't
Winnipeg, right?
I remember you asking if there was anyone else around there
Delete it now.
now
I will go to Canada for a kill, don't think I won't
Winnipeg, right?
I remember you asking if there was anyone else around there
Delete it now.
now
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iyr (03/18/2012) [-] Um. . .
I went back and revised your emblem. In the original version (below) it skips for just a second, whereas this one loops seamlessly.
Glad to have you back friend, even if it's for just a short while.
I went back and revised your emblem. In the original version (below) it skips for just a second, whereas this one loops seamlessly.
Glad to have you back friend, even if it's for just a short while.
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cowboybebop (01/31/2012) [-] As you asked.
Beyond Her Garden
(Carrot Top’s Song)
cowboybebop
She was a lonely girl. Creamy orange– a sunrise in a world that was near its end. The ground had become dry and brown; unhealthy, irreparable damage done by decades of pollution. The ponies were at the eve of destruction at this point in time. Each born with unique talents and characteristics, everypony was special in their only little way, each had an advantage over everypony else, but none could undo what their predecessors had done.
Their village was located in the middle of an open, stretching plain. It would have made her grandfather’s picture of Appleoosa look like an oasis.
Day after day, the sun rose and scorched the earth, burning anything that wasn’t shaded to a crisp. There were no other animals outside of their metal-covered village, a single dying tree in the center, magically holding up the enormous sheet of steel that protected the ponies of Haven. As far as anypony knew, they were the last on the planet. Although, many knew this wouldn’t last much longer: the hundred-year supply vault was nearing depletion, and soon the ponies of Haven would be no longer- no crops had grown since the year directly after the first Sky Tear, and the water at the bottom of the well would not outlast the youngest member.
Beyond Her Garden
(Carrot Top’s Song)
cowboybebop
She was a lonely girl. Creamy orange– a sunrise in a world that was near its end. The ground had become dry and brown; unhealthy, irreparable damage done by decades of pollution. The ponies were at the eve of destruction at this point in time. Each born with unique talents and characteristics, everypony was special in their only little way, each had an advantage over everypony else, but none could undo what their predecessors had done.
Their village was located in the middle of an open, stretching plain. It would have made her grandfather’s picture of Appleoosa look like an oasis.
Day after day, the sun rose and scorched the earth, burning anything that wasn’t shaded to a crisp. There were no other animals outside of their metal-covered village, a single dying tree in the center, magically holding up the enormous sheet of steel that protected the ponies of Haven. As far as anypony knew, they were the last on the planet. Although, many knew this wouldn’t last much longer: the hundred-year supply vault was nearing depletion, and soon the ponies of Haven would be no longer- no crops had grown since the year directly after the first Sky Tear, and the water at the bottom of the well would not outlast the youngest member.
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samwichwon (01/31/2012) [-] Let me be blunt.
I can review this easily because you look like a novice.
I like the premise, there's some great potential here, and I can see evidence of great planning on your part.
There must have been an error though, in translating your thoughts to text.
In other words, your intro is too short, and many things need a lot more description, and background. An introduction is meant to introduce, make it do that.
For example, change "Day after day, the sun rose and scorched the earth, burning anything that wasn’t shaded to a crisp." to "The scorching sun rose each day, casting scornful rays on everything that tried feebly to grow"
The more you can describe with fewer words, the better
Don't be discouraged, writing is hard, and you've got great potential. I like where this is going
I can review this easily because you look like a novice.
I like the premise, there's some great potential here, and I can see evidence of great planning on your part.
There must have been an error though, in translating your thoughts to text.
In other words, your intro is too short, and many things need a lot more description, and background. An introduction is meant to introduce, make it do that.
For example, change "Day after day, the sun rose and scorched the earth, burning anything that wasn’t shaded to a crisp." to "The scorching sun rose each day, casting scornful rays on everything that tried feebly to grow"
The more you can describe with fewer words, the better
Don't be discouraged, writing is hard, and you've got great potential. I like where this is going
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cowboybebop (01/31/2012) [-] Yeah, I had intended this to be a (very) rough draft; I tend to write things out as basically as I can and then fill it out. Also, this is only a partial intro: I understand what you mean by (paraphrasing) "it needs to be longer." While this may be so, I had intended to only make it roughly 1,500 words maximum- you have persuaded me (most likely unbeknownst to you) to make it longer than that. Thank you muchly for your time!
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