Hold up for a moment

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So is this good or....

As a reference? Yeah I guess.

No as... a picture of... my steam avatar.... probally my Youtube

I see. I think you need to focus more on the solider. Needs more dynamic pose.

I was aiming more at the Soldier Admiring the stench of the blood of once he use to have of his own ever since, that day

Stil. Needs more focus on him. Try making it closer to the Solider and but more emphasis on examination. I didn't even know he was looking at it until you told me.

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Closer. try using his hands in a more like a examination. It just looks lie he is trying to hide his face behind the sword.

This?

Better. Try getting closer on his face. Just a normal "picture" angle

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Just try and get the torso up. Your getting there.