Idea for a new comic. Whattya thing? (and _____ means new frame. it's a comic)

Henry: Hey Stephano what's the matter?_____
Ste: *sniff sniff* Julie broke up with me____
Henry: Awwww that's a shame. I know what will
cheer you up though_____ We can dance if you
want to...
Ste: No please stop__
Henry: We can leave your friends behind
Ste: Stop singing____
Henry: Cause your friends don't dance and if they
don't dance
Ste: I'm gonna kill you!____
Both: Well they're not friends of mine!___
Both: hahahahahaha____
Henry: So why did Julie break up with you anyway?___
Ste: (me gusta) bc whenever I heard Saftey Dance
I had the urge to rape her____