Retrochris? I know you don't like being mentioned, but are you cool with this idea?

I don't mind being mentioned.
It's just that too often I get mentioned for minor things basically everyone else could help with (a lot of "how does this/that work" mentions, for which I just don't have the time...

this though? well, you do what you like lol, how would I mind?

Eh, figured admin gave ya some authority on the page, didn't want to tick people off that I couldn't afford to.

you could keep the points and run like that slimey weasel xinzly

other than that excellent plan

But thanks lol. Put a lot of time into thinking this up.

I've straight up given over 40000 worth of points or more away as prizes over two weeks now, and donated mounds of tokens and other items. I think I've got a little more crediblity than that :p

you have that credibility

Awesome.

Well, I always select all the text of users which have that kind of colored text.
Short answer: Yes.

Sorry about that.

"Increment", amount or volume at a fixed amount.

gg

Eh, one of those words used to mean two different things, or used improperly that is commonly used to mean something else that has become common vernacular; I.E, "Decimate", which originally meant "a tenth destroyed", but has commonly become used to mean "utterly destroyed." Everybody knew what I meant in my original message well enough to get the gist of it.

Sorry m8

NP bro, enjoy the gems!

Sorry, just getting rid of the gems right now. A lot of those items have some sentimental value-- bit golems, swords, and such, and I'm not just giving it all up. And I already promised the gems to capslockrage and dontfoolme, sorry mate

It's alright; honestly, I'd prefer if you kept playing.

I'm so busy with work and an actual social life these days, as opposed when I was an introverted twat (personal description, I'm not implying other items players are like that, promise) and I'm getting super competitive with Pokemon, I just don't have the time or attention span to do items lately.

well im assuming you have a computer?
try some online games? just kill some time till you go to sleep
itll be ok friend <3

also try breathing in unison with this gif, supposed to help

Sorry! Didn't notice until you said something. My bad!

Oh Thank You

Lol welcome. Now, back to work and Pokemon team building afterward. I'm getting super competitive in that lately, planning on competing in regionals next year.

Cool WIN WIN

That's the idea! Do you play?

No, only FJ

Lol ok

Best Luck

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If I can, I really need the horse dia., linen, wood and coins

NOOOOOO I HAD A SOCIAL LIFE AND A JOB AND GOT PRETTY DAMN GOOD AT POKEMON I DO NOT NEED ITEMS

Can I have 'em ? ;)

... Just in case I lose my mind and start playing again, no. Not right now, anyway. TOO MANY MEMORIES DUDE

Oh yes, the memories attached to each and every one. What was I thinking My bad. Miss you tho

You can have my points, though.

No, I'm going to DONOR, he give me a bargain

SWEET Thank You so much. I love to go shopping in the AH.

Lol I'm working so many hours lately, playing Pokemon competitively about 15 hours a week, and SOMEHOW have a bit of a social life. How, I don't know.

Pokemon ? Are you winning or something ?

I'm actually considering entering some local tournaments in the next few months if my personal schedule allows it. I'm damn good over WIFI, now I just have to get better at double battles.

Yes, enter if you're that good at it Best Luck too.

Still want those points though?

Absol ******* lutely Want me to send ?

Lol sure, send

Thank You Much

Welcome lol

OK, OK, lol

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I might come back one day. Honestly, I've spent so much time collecting and crafting and bargaining, I'm not willing to let go of them. I was around in the first days of the game, and I'm reluctant to let go.

Ok I understand. Is there any way you'd be willing to part with some stuff you have bulk of like maybe gems or ores?

Don't think so, sorry.

Is something neurologically wrong with you?

your mom ate my cum inside the pussy of hers and gave birth to you

My mother died shortly after I was born. I've never actually met her. Thanks for reminding me.

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hey, ************ , please respond here, real question for you.

whats up?

you okay pokemon and trade online? Because I actually got a shiny mudkip the other day and thought you might like it lol

thanks for the offer, but i havent played pokemon in a while, i think you'll put it to better use

No problem, peace

you had me at hue

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the world must know

Nope! Doing a lot better now. Life is ok at the moment.

Well, hello. What's up?

It starts off about a month after her mother dies. She's a nervous wreck. She doesn't wanna be near people.

She has frequent night terrors about it which causes her to go into an uncontrollable rage. Breaks things attacks people.

It gets to the point where Hiroshi creates an anti-depressant solely designed for keeping her calm and instructs all the maids "One peep out of her you give her this. She needs to learn the hard way loss is something that happens and it can't be controlled"

I dunno dude. It sounds more and more (especially with the images that you're posting) that this is gonna end up as some kinda torture porn and I'm not down with that **** . That last one where she's about to brand Korra? To my taste, that's completely repugnant, and absolutely not my style. Not something I'm interested in reading or writing.

Its like you don't even know how Karma works.

I get the show, trust me, and I understand what you're thinking. But I'll say it again, based on the images you sent me it's gonna be nothing but torture porn for the nightmare fetishists, and I personally want nothing to do with anything like that.

Look its gonna be a very hard road for Korra but EVENTUALLY Korra will muscle back with the fury of 1000 rampaging bison

This is how character development works

Not if you take a character that's been, in canon, a friend to her all throughout the series and suddenly turn her into a raving monster with unrequited rage and daddy issues. If you wanna work a character with an alternate past, sure, go for it, it can be interesting sometimes. But this? Completely unbelievable and wrong.

But hey, opinions. You do what you do if it gives you your kicks.

Bruh

C'mon what do you want from me

She's suppose to be the Non bending equivalent of Azula in this universe. Azula was anything but "Mentally sound"

Like I said, you can write about anything you want, but stuff like that holds absolutely zero interest with me, and that's that dude. Take it or leave it.

Then help me with the story then so it fits your criteria

You've given me a couple plot points, but you haven't given me much of a story yet. There's a huge difference between the two. Do you have any kind of prose written down yet? Rough draft? Anything like that? I can't critique unless I see something and understand your level of writing. I'm not the best writer myself, but I'm a damn good editor and I can pick something apart like it's a Megablock tower.

Going back to the anti depressant Hiroshi made. He calls it "SatoQuil" which operates and functions like Morphine

Its very powerful **** knocks her out the second she's about to lose her temper. Now Hiroshi has been getting phone calls from the Board saying "You need to let your daughter recover on her own so we're requesting you leave the premise and have the maids look after her while you attend the company elsewhere"

Asami learns about this and throws the most violent tantrum ever. She's already lost her mother and now her dad is leaving for a very long time and the extreme lonliness is hurting her psychologically

Right, like I said. You've got plot points and ideas. How much have you actually written out, though? Anything posted online?

Most of Book 1 and All of Book 4

Long story short one of the maids takes advantage of Asami's mental disposition and decides to roleplay as her mother...and she buys this because she's desperate for some parental love in her life

This maid is ******* evil. When Asami reaches her mature age she teaches her "You're a Sato. Sato's are royalty you do not associate with anyone lesser than you"

The Maid then pays 1000 Da Li agents to attend with her to the South Pole because Asami's birthday is coming up and Asami who as instructed earlier doesn't treat people like people wants a slave for her birthday

So after a violent struggle they get Korra on the boat and the story results around Korra learning the ****** up sheltered livelyhood Asami lives on a daily basis

Gonna be honest, I've taken in everything you've told me about this idea and it just doesn't seem up my alley. I like action, adventure, and strong main characters, but you're describing psychological, emotional, and physical torture porn to me (in my own opinion) and I try to have nothing to do with that.

I will say that you might have an idea that would cater to a select audience, and if you write it out correctly, then you might have something. But I, personally, am not interested in working with you on this project. I wish you luck, but it's not for me.

...What does it need

Well, if that's oroginal artwork from you there, then I commend you for that. But if you're gonna write out something of that scale, the first thing you need to do is sit down and write a draft, a script. It doesn't have to be paragraph after paragraph of details, but what you do need is an outline that you'll work from. Spend time on it until you're absolutely positive that it's what you'll stick with. Dialogue is key in this kind of thing. You need organic dialogue, believable motivations, and do yourself a favor and research the ACTUAL effects of abandonment and parentally-induced psychosis. Seriously, a girl ******* branding her crippled best friend? Not happening. The Avatar being helpless against her? Bending notwithstanding, Korra could probably punch through a brick wall. She'd slam Asami in her solar plexis and knock that bitch out, crawl on the floor, and snap her neck. Korra, even in a wheelchair, isn't helpless, and you're VASTLY overplaying that part.

You're trying to turn this into some Jigsaw **** , and it's simply, without a doubt, unbelievable. No matter how good the artwork is, if the story is bull **** , then nobody is gonna stick around and see it through.

But hey, again, opinions. I'm not your target audience here. If that's your artwork, it's good stuff, and you've got talent. I'd suggest finding someone to collab with storywise who shares interests with you. But you said it was a Xenoblade crossover, and I know nothing about the series.

Again, I wish you luck, but this isn't for me. I've given you all the practical advice I could think of already.

it was raining earlier but the storm is settling

Nothing much just staying comfy while I wait on some art projects

Cool. Looks like rain here, had to hustle to the library before it starts pouring down. Trying to work on some writing projects of my own, but original creative stuff is hard for me. Haven't written anything with effort in over a year, so I'm thinking of slamming out some fanfiction for the next couple months to get back into the groove.

What kind of genre do you specialize in

Since you seem gifted in the art of screen writing maybe you can help my story out

I like writing action scenes in a fantasy setting. Fantasty fiction is fun, but hard, because when you create a world with magic, you have to have clear cut, set and defined rules that are immutable. Magic A is Magic A and cannot be Magic B, if that makes any sense, and your characters have to be believable and flawed and brilliant and amazing all at the same time.

My fanfics tend to be Naruto stuff, but I'm working with Soul Eater and Teen Titans too. Been a while, though. Here's my biggest fic so far: www.fanfiction.net/s/4054990/1/Rising-Star

Thanks for the mention

>Naruto stuff

Can't really argue that since My story is about Legend of Korra and Xenoblade

Cool. Love LOK, but not too familiar with Xenoblade. But if you need someone to look over your work and offer critiques, more than happy to.

If you got the time maybe you could look after it now or are you busy?

Just browsing FJ front page and giggling because I just had content hit top 10. Besides that, nothing going on.

Tell ya what

Give me the highlights of your story and i'll give you the highlights of mine

Sure, why not.

The tale, tentitively under the working title of "Shadowpact" is a fantasy alternate history story in which, during Shakespearian times, magic came back to the world. Every monster, creature, spirit, or god that had ever been told about in legend had suddenly reappeared on earth. The course of history changes from there. Empires fall, some rise, some spread, and some would never come to be.

The main body of the story takes place in the 1920's, centered around Scotland with a focus on local Celtic mythology. The main character is a man named Alexander Morgan, a 23 year old mage who works for a guild of other mages, benevolant (or at least not overly violent) monsters and creatures, and fey. Think a cross between Fairy Tail and Naruto, and you get the idea, at least as far as the mercenary work goes.

Morgan is the latest in a line of descendants of the Dullahan, the creature that inspired the Headless Horseman tale of Sleepy Hollow, though at the beginning of the tale he doesn't know that.

It's a good story idea, and I've already drafted out large parts of it, but writing it down for others to read is a bit tricky at this stage. Need a lot more practice.

Interesting...

My story is a retelling of all 4 books. A what if Scenario of what would happen if the death of Asami's mom traumatized her so bad...she became a violent sociopath

Essentially what would happen if Korra and Asami were never friends. Its like a Batman/Joker vibe to it

>Asami got out again?
>She killed 20 nurses today
>...I'll be right back

Hm, ok. Not bad. Gotta be careful with sociopathy, it's a lot trickier to write believably than you might think.

Eh, these guys were eaten by a fox and they turned out all right in the end. What's the worst that could happen?

Oh, good point! I'm gonna go eat some chicken to prepare for this amazing event.

Also, what did you do to earn pink text? Looks nice. I used to have purple text but it was only for a week.

It's a perk for posting funny OC or getting hella thumbs up in content. Go look at my items, I've got about 15 of the week-long colored text items left. Users like us can earn them, but not trade them, so anybody with colored text is a funny mother ****** .

Nice. I used to get nice thumbs on my comments, but then I stopped because college distracts me.

Ouch. Well, come back and make some funny sometime. Lord knows we need it.

Or, follow me on this.

I make a themed panda account and ******** with the other kids.

Hmm. Interesting. This has potential. Take some time and plan things out. Get a bunch of pics in a file and make sure you have something for every eventuality. Most of all, be clever. Not gonna name names so they don't see this, but if you're gonna ******** , do it RIGHT.

Lol. I have a ton of panda reaction pictures but I keep them to the appropriate board 95% of the time. I'd rather not be mistaken for a genuine themed account. That's not me.

Anyway, I did get my thumbs by being clever, but I'm too exhausted to bother lately. Maybe once I take care of my living arrangement.

Good luck, buddy.

Ayyyyy

I don't know who you are or why you left this here, but I love you.