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User avatar #16 to #14 - gramernazi (11/18/2012) [-]
That was a good short story. If you have to continue it, maybe you should use 3rd or 1st person, because 2nd person stories don't tend to be very long but if it's not as long as a book then I say you should keep it. It's not that much of a creepypasta but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It didn't give me as much fear as some of them but then again I have lights on. The story is really relate-able except that I wouldn't really get up to go to the bathroom. For a short story, it's well written. I give it about a 8 to 9 out of 10.
User avatar #17 to #16 - whomadewho (11/18/2012) [-]
thank you
User avatar #15 to #14 - gramernazi (11/18/2012) [-]
Cool, I'll start reading it soon.
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