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#214
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timeforsp (05/02/2012) [-]
I can't read your fanfic tonight, I'm still editing someone else's fanfic.
It's the craziest thing you'll ever read.
www.fimfiction.net/story/2323/Backwards-Through-the-Mirror
"They watch and listen, wait in the shadows, in the reflections on window panes and from the light playing off puddles. Twilight Sparkle was taken, after helping with Discord's dismissal, and her life has been horror and fire since then, helping an alien creature known as the Librarian with his inscrutable tasks. She escaped, and now finds herself in a much darker, crazier Equestria, where Princess Luna rules, the death penalty is back, and Twilight Sparkle is almost as infamous as Nightmare Moon. Add that in with the changes her keeper had inflicted on Twilight and her life is almost like a waking nightmare."
www.fimfiction.net/story/2323/Backwards-Through-the-Mirror
"They watch and listen, wait in the shadows, in the reflections on window panes and from the light playing off puddles. Twilight Sparkle was taken, after helping with Discord's dismissal, and her life has been horror and fire since then, helping an alien creature known as the Librarian with his inscrutable tasks. She escaped, and now finds herself in a much darker, crazier Equestria, where Princess Luna rules, the death penalty is back, and Twilight Sparkle is almost as infamous as Nightmare Moon. Add that in with the changes her keeper had inflicted on Twilight and her life is almost like a waking nightmare."
An excerpt:
"Blackboard grinned like a foal that knew more than the teacher, “Well, in a sense you're not changing the gate, just the destination.” Blackboard approached the arch, which still showed the Hedge on the other side and stuck his hoof through. “See, when you make a door to the Hedge, you're not making it do anything, you're asking it to. It's... Getting around the physics and magical physics by asking nicely.”
Twilight gave Blackboard a hard look, “Asking nicely.”
“Yep!” Blackboard grinned, thoroughly enjoying himself,
“How?”
Blackboard laughed, “You just ask, like you do when you ask the shadows to let you climb up the wall. They... Nudge physics aside, as it were, and, like that, the gateway changes the place the arch opens to, without changing the arch at all.”
“But,” Twilight protested, “That makes no sense! There's no science to it! It's like...” Twilight broke off, blinking, then finished softly, “Like... Pinkie...” Twilight gave Blackboard a sharp look of sudden inquiry. The red stallion laughed and shrugged."
"Blackboard grinned like a foal that knew more than the teacher, “Well, in a sense you're not changing the gate, just the destination.” Blackboard approached the arch, which still showed the Hedge on the other side and stuck his hoof through. “See, when you make a door to the Hedge, you're not making it do anything, you're asking it to. It's... Getting around the physics and magical physics by asking nicely.”
Twilight gave Blackboard a hard look, “Asking nicely.”
“Yep!” Blackboard grinned, thoroughly enjoying himself,
“How?”
Blackboard laughed, “You just ask, like you do when you ask the shadows to let you climb up the wall. They... Nudge physics aside, as it were, and, like that, the gateway changes the place the arch opens to, without changing the arch at all.”
“But,” Twilight protested, “That makes no sense! There's no science to it! It's like...” Twilight broke off, blinking, then finished softly, “Like... Pinkie...” Twilight gave Blackboard a sharp look of sudden inquiry. The red stallion laughed and shrugged."