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#82 - I still say Bronco will kill Tombstone.	07/24/2015 on Battlebots Predictions	+1
#179 - Ah. Thank you.	06/15/2015 on Starter Pack Comp	0
#164 - Close. Roman. [+] (3 new replies)	06/14/2015 on Starter Pack Comp	0
#181 - anon (06/15/2015) [-] Yep like unclaimedusername said, falcatas were really feared by roman legionaries, as a certain blow from an iron or later-on steel falcata would obliterate the early roman empire bronze helmets, and crush the skull underneath. Centuries later, romans started incorporating some of the swords characteristics into their own, just like they did with the gladius #171 - unclaimedusername (06/15/2015) [-] There are two names for that type of sword: a Greek one (Kopis) and the Iberian one (Falcata); the Romans did use the Iberian version some, which might be what you are thinking of, but it most certainly not Roman #179 - aech (06/15/2015) [-] Ah. Thank you.
#162 - **** yeah, kukris. Falcatas are cool, too. Pic related. [+] (5 new replies)	06/14/2015 on Starter Pack Comp	0
#163 - greyhoundfd (06/14/2015) [-] That looks like a Greek design, is it? #164 - aech (06/14/2015) [-] Close. Roman. #181 - anon (06/15/2015) [-] Yep like unclaimedusername said, falcatas were really feared by roman legionaries, as a certain blow from an iron or later-on steel falcata would obliterate the early roman empire bronze helmets, and crush the skull underneath. Centuries later, romans started incorporating some of the swords characteristics into their own, just like they did with the gladius #171 - unclaimedusername (06/15/2015) [-] There are two names for that type of sword: a Greek one (Kopis) and the Iberian one (Falcata); the Romans did use the Iberian version some, which might be what you are thinking of, but it most certainly not Roman #179 - aech (06/15/2015) [-] Ah. Thank you.
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#52 - misskayla (03/24/2015) [-]

#47 - atheisttsiehta ONLINE (03/08/2015) [-]

Hi black lesbian.

#48 to #47 - aech (03/08/2015) [-]

#49 to #48 - atheisttsiehta ONLINE (03/08/2015) [-]

I recently read ready player one and I want to talk to someone about it.

#50 to #49 - aech (03/08/2015) [-]

Anything in particular?

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#46 - murrlogic (03/07/2015) [-]

Good morning

I'm hungover.

#18 - murrlogic (03/07/2015) [-]

>Responding with Stick Figures

#19 to #18 - aech (03/07/2015) [-]

You got a problem with my stick figures, bruh?

#40 to #19 - murrlogic (03/07/2015) [-]

As stated before these strips I am showing are not the actual project. Take these are rough drafts at best

And I said I'm **** at writing so I do the best with what I got. Some other plot points worth knowing about

I'm rewritting all 4 books of LoK. Major and I mean HUGE ******* retcons are happening in this

Sato Industries is a global monopoly. One of the largest faceless corporations on the planet which Asami rules with an iron fist. Pretty much all products all over the planet are mass produced and sold by Sato Industries ONLY. There is no such thing as competiton in this universe Asami rules it all.

#41 to #40 - aech (03/07/2015) [-]

Oo. Shiny plot. That's intriguing as hell.

And I know, but you did ask for more advice.Here's some general stuff to make up for it:
Writing skill advances the more you use it and the more you read. It's a muscle that needs to be exercised. That said, do the same thing for too long, you'll strain the muscle and it'll be useless for a while. Hence the imaginary thing called "writer's block." It's really just an excuse to be lazy. To overcome writer's block, all you have to do is write something else. Change courses. Dabble in something new. Take on a challenge, like writing solely in one-syllable words, writing exactly 100 words, or starting each new sentence of a story in alphabetical order.

I would say for an undertaking as big as this to write solid words instead of converting it to a GN, just to save grief and time, but it's a joint project with your friend.

#42 to #41 - murrlogic (03/07/2015) [-]

And here is the last rough draft before I begin showing you the actual project

Some other plot points worth knowing about

Asami's relationship with Korra is extremely abusive. These 4 book retellings the common trend is Asami's ego drives Korra crazy and not a second goes by where Korra doesn't wanna lift a semi truck and smash Asami to death with it.

Book 1 the Equalists have this brand new device called Anti-Bending collars which are near impossible to get off without a special key. They're designed to electrocute you if you try to remove them by force and Asami ends up getting one of these collars to put around Korra's neck

Book 1 Korra can't bend...at all. She's a non bender at best with this thing wrapped around her neck so Asami then proceeds to dress Korra up in a maid outfit and work her ass ragged having her do chores nonstop.

#43 to #42 - aech (03/07/2015) [-]

Requesting full dump of completed items.

#44 to #43 - murrlogic (03/07/2015) [-]

Now for the actual project

This is a prequel called Legend of Sato. Two scenarios are taking place right now. The White Lotus have found Korra located in the south pole and are taking her to the training camps. Meanwhile Asami's mom has been burned alive by the Ag Ni Kai triad

Asami witnessed the whole thing and now is emotionally damaged. Her father Hiroshi quietly took her out of private school to home school her but emotions got out of control as she proceeded to break everything in sight and violently try to attack anyone who came near her.

#45 to #44 - aech (03/07/2015) [-]

Neat. Sorry for taking an hour to reply. I was working on something with my beta. I should actually really be getting to sleep....

#30 to #19 - murrlogic (03/07/2015) [-]

What about fanficiton?

#31 to #30 - aech (03/07/2015) [-]

I must admit I am something of a fanfiction writer, myself.

#32 to #31 - murrlogic (03/07/2015) [-]

Well I'm writing fanfiction on LoK

#33 to #32 - aech (03/07/2015) [-]

Oh, neato. Is this comic strip yours?

#34 to #33 - murrlogic (03/07/2015) [-]

My friend draws I write the script

writing is hard.

#35 to #34 - aech (03/07/2015) [-]

Holy **** that's dark. But yeah, writing is hard. Really, really hard. Do you have a document of the script?

#36 to #35 - murrlogic (03/07/2015) [-]

Not an official document because I re-edit a lot.

To tell you the story long story short this is a re-telling of LoK where the what-if is Asami is a violent, unloving, uncaring, materialistic corporate sociopath

#37 to #36 - aech (03/07/2015) [-]

Huh. Interesting concept. I would suggest just making a google doc, though, and edit as needed. The most important thing to know when writing is to just keep moving forward. You write the really ****** first draft, then you go back and cut out the useless **** and then refine the stuff you keep. Don't edit as you go unless it's to change a big plot point. You'll just get stuck.

To be brutally honest, the dialogue you have here is kind of weak. I'm not really getting the impression of dangerous psycho. I'd use Azula as a model for that. Strip away some of her crazier dialogue, incorporate parts of Azula into Asami, but keep Asami's cadence and mode of speech as close to the show as possible. Korra's dialogue is rather spot-on; I can hear the voice actress in my head. But take into consideration the emotions of both characters. Korra is at one of the weakest points in her life when she's in the wheelchair. Wouldn't she be far more afraid? Far more broken?

#38 to #37 - murrlogic (03/07/2015) [-]

>Korra
>Afraid

Not ever. Korra follows only one sort of emotion and that is violent rage

Also these comics I am showing you are not the actual project. These were just some drafts I worked on during Book 3 and 4. I'll show you the real project soon but until then keep giving me advice

Needless to say I'm not the best writer. I try to get the best of their personalities.

#39 to #38 - aech (03/07/2015) [-]

Still, Korra was incredibly depressed for some time. And then came PTSD Korra. Also, rage comes from fear.

Asami just sounds very still and flat to me. Give her dimensions and inflection. Use diction Asami would use. Or maybe you are and I just need to watch the show again. Use bold and italicized words. Show the reader where certain words are stressed or enunciated. Bomango is a great graphic comic-ish thing that really shows how to do that well. I might also be getting the impression because of the art, but that can't really be helped in a draft.