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Maybe

 
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Submitted: 02/03/2013
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User avatar #5 - captainislam (02/03/2013) [+] (4 replies)
pretty good i liked it a solid 8/10 and i rate things harsh. i don't have any tips for making it better though. but keep at it you seem to have the gift of words.
#1 - N. Korean citizen (02/03/2013) [+] (3 replies)
FJ is not your fucking English teacher.

0/10, not even funny, wasted my time and I couldn't fap to it.
#4 to #3 - xaxoz (02/03/2013) [-]
Thanks man, I appreciate that very much! I wrote this because the episode i mention in the begining happend to me this friday :)
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