Check Out My Song - Morning Story

Hmm, I try to be honest with you it is not bad but it is also not good. I think it lacks some "highlights", if you know what I mean. I am not able to spot a story in this, it gives me no "feel" you could have also called it "an average day at work".

By now you can tell I have no clue about the music making, but maybe my impression as a complete layman in the fields of music, helps you to become better or work on it. Either way, have a good day!