I would be interested.

Alright. Do you know any free file sharing sites you'd recommend?

Mediafire, or you could use Google Docs, since it saves your file as a URL. People post fanfictions there all the time.

Sick, thanks. Let me know if this link doesn't work.
docs.google.com/document/d/15XsUTt5BVyr9RPmNwZVyMAVvMJtBM38J0o4YlrgdsMg/edit

...Ground...Chakras...

Yeah, I wanted to try to put a new twist, or a cool explanation as to how the pokemon world could work, etc;

It's because of the 'ground-chakras' that I couldn't picture an Earthquake and Bulldoze attack in my head

How so? The rubble from the earthquake attack is just simulated rock created by chakra. Real earth wouldn't be possible, since they're standing on like a plastic-like strip. And the way I have bulldoze described his just ground-type chakra/energy wrapped around the Sandslash's arm, so he really just attacks with his claws like normal, only since the chakra's there it does ground-type damage.

So in other words how it would use it in Colosseum or XD if Bulldoze was a move when they came out

No idea, I never played either game.

I wasn't asking a question. And such a shame. They were both very awesome games. The graphics and music, just beautiful.

And Miror B alone is well worth playing XD for.

Well everytime I've seen that give it's made me angry. I don't know why, it just pisses me off.

Shhh. Just let the music play.
Maybe its the fact that he uses Ludicolo's like a bitch. Rain Dish ability, Rain Dance, Leech Seed, Mega Drain, and some other move, its different for each one

No, it's just his dance moves, they annoy me.

His battle music in XD is awesome though

Just started, and all I have to say is...
exited...
Exited,,,
Excited...

It works. Reading now.
You could really work on your indents, bro.

Too lazy.

Where? I can't find it.

Whoop, my bad. I mixed them up in my head XD

No worries, lol.

Sandslash can't learn Quick Attack, though, and I think you got Hyper Beam and some Punching move mixed up about a third of the way through page 2, unless Hyper Punch is the equivalent to Focus Punch or something where you live.

The Electivire used quick attack, not the Sandslash.
And I could have sworn Hyper punch was a real attack.

'Tisn't. Maybe you're thinking of Mega Punch?

Nah, it was focus punch. I knew there was a physical attack equivalent to hyper beam, and I knew it ended in punch, so I figured it was called hyper punch.
And I spelled Electivire wrong the first half of the story xD

And you said the crowd was exited, not excited

Could be how Mega Punch is called in a different language

Is it as good as the OB's Story series?

Nope.