Fuck Titles. Completely OC. Let me know if you guys want me to write more!. stands h the dark, empty hall' slowly reme' -ares bloodied knife frem behind, smilin
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Completely OC. Let me know if you guys want me to write more!

stands h the dark, empty hall'
slowly reme' -ares bloodied knife frem behind, smiling menacingly‘
slowly rotties toward wer reem‘
slowly reaches fer the handle:
epins the deer. *
enters wer reem‘
slowly. quietly clases the deer‘
he approaches lying cerise en the bed'
he stands next m bed, waitig, watching'
his presence leavers the temperature m reem. we *
he stands next m yew head, watching yew every "
the reem darkens‘
we begin m feel uneasy, we feel like yew being watching, paranoia fills we‘
we slowly awaken, opening yew eyes'
we leek: amend the reem.....‘
we see.... nething. an empty dark reem‘
we are relieved'
we turn amend m finally sleep, but we turn m see him‘
his empty seedless eyes here inte sew. his white face brightens wers‘
he epins his meath and.....'
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User avatar #7 - sekretsauce **User deleted account** (07/14/2013) [+] (1 reply)
I... I heard something last night. It's probably nothing... I just felt like telling someone.
I heard my door creak open, which was odd. I always had a habit of keeping it firmly shut, for masturbatory purposes. But... But I felt this shiver run down my spine. I mean, I'm writing this now, aren't I? I'm fine.
However, I just can't get it out of me. My door creaking open... The tap, tap, tap on my window. Maybe it was raining last night?... No, it's been a heat-wave for a month now.
Something's not right. When I turn my back, I see nothing. When I look away, I feel as if I'm prey, being hunted.

-----2 hours later-----
I heard a crash. It was my front window. I'm terrified to go look, but it feels as if it's calling me. Beckoning me... Wishing for me to set my eyes upon whatever face had decided to come see me in such a crude manner. It wants to know that I know it lives.
I do know it lives, I just can't think to give it the satisfactio
#5 - girlwithglasses (07/14/2013) [+] (1 reply)
Very good suspense but try writing it like an actual story instead of one line sentences. Possibly do it in first person.

I think that would really improve it.

Keep it up and have a thumb.
User avatar #2 - stonerjesus (07/14/2013) [+] (1 reply)
If I'm a corpse how am I shivering?
User avatar #3 - jacksipian ONLINE (07/14/2013) [-]
AND WHAT?????? WHAT HAPPENS NEXT????
User avatar #1 - butcanitblend (07/14/2013) [-]
will it blend
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