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#245
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cheesbaby (02/17/2013) [-]
mfw dont and medicin
Unfortunately spelling and grammar seemed to take a holiday for this, the punctuation is either wrong or non-existent in places. Ellipses are to be used to omit unnecessary text, not as a pause, and the mixture of capitals and lower case (though infrequent) makes for a difficult read.
Yeah it's funny and I really like the story, it's imaginative and expresses the love of the subject that modern western popular society seems to be lacking, but it's so painful to read.
Unfortunately spelling and grammar seemed to take a holiday for this, the punctuation is either wrong or non-existent in places. Ellipses are to be used to omit unnecessary text, not as a pause, and the mixture of capitals and lower case (though infrequent) makes for a difficult read.
Yeah it's funny and I really like the story, it's imaginative and expresses the love of the subject that modern western popular society seems to be lacking, but it's so painful to read.