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#245 - cheesbaby (02/17/2013) [-]
mfw dont and medicin   
   
Unfortunately spelling and grammar seemed to take a holiday for this, the punctuation is either wrong or non-existent in places. Ellipses are to be used to omit unnecessary text, not as a pause, and the mixture of capitals and lower case (though infrequent) makes for a difficult read.    
   
Yeah it's funny and I really like the story, it's imaginative and expresses the love of the subject that modern western popular society seems to be lacking, but it's so painful to read.
mfw dont and medicin

Unfortunately spelling and grammar seemed to take a holiday for this, the punctuation is either wrong or non-existent in places. Ellipses are to be used to omit unnecessary text, not as a pause, and the mixture of capitals and lower case (though infrequent) makes for a difficult read.

Yeah it's funny and I really like the story, it's imaginative and expresses the love of the subject that modern western popular society seems to be lacking, but it's so painful to read.
#249 to #245 - N. Korean citizen (02/17/2013) [-]
You don't need perfect grammar and spelling on the internet, stop being such massive twat badger.
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