The Apocalypse: Part 1. Part 1 of the suspense series. 2 guys that survived the apocalypse. stick around to see what happens next...<br /> This is my firs the apocalypse Part one mattiscoollike new series zombies survivors
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The Apocalypse: Part 1. Part 1 of the suspense series. 2 guys that survived the apocalypse. stick around to see what happens next...<br /> This is my firs

Part 1 of the suspense series. 2 guys that survived the apocalypse. stick around to see what happens next...<br />
This is my first series so go easy on the Thumbs! =]

to be continued...
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Submitted: 05/10/2010
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User avatar #1 - mattiscoollike (05/10/2010) [-]
comment and tell me your thoughts so i can improve!
#3 to #1 - thegoodrevtom (05/10/2010) [-]
it was a cool start.... but explaining it all in the description.... that was not the best choice.... actually i did not thumb because of that. if i had disliked it, i would've thumbed it down because of the description.

But keep it up man (the comic that is!)
User avatar #4 to #3 - mattiscoollike (05/10/2010) [-]
should i shorten the description then?
#5 to #4 - thegoodrevtom (05/10/2010) [-]
I would put "Part 1 of the suspense series. stick around to see what happens next...
This is my first series so go easy on the Thumbs! =] "

basically leaving out that its about 2 guys that survived the apocalypse.
User avatar #6 to #5 - mattiscoollike (05/10/2010) [-]
lol i actualy wrote exactly that b4 u responded
#7 to #6 - thegoodrevtom (05/10/2010) [-]
i like the premise and want to see where things go... but that one little sentence is like you're either: calling us dumb or saying that what you did made absolutely no sense and have to explain....

being neither are true... i'd leave that cut out
User avatar #8 - Ryanzorz (05/12/2010) [-]
that is the most aerodynamic car i have ever seen how many miles to the gallon?
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