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#60 - smallhorses **User deleted account** has deleted their comment [-]
User avatar #59 - mlphentailover (01/13/2012) [-]
*hugs* Happy birthday!
User avatar #58 - DareDaShit (01/13/2012) [-]
Happy Birthday!
#57 - inteus (01/13/2012) [-]
Happy day that is a birth celebrated years later!
#56 - lupine (01/13/2012) [-]
Happy Birthday. :3
User avatar #55 - Bluecoolman (01/13/2012) [-]
Happy Birthday!
#52 - XAssassin (01/13/2012) [-]
Happy Birthday
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User avatar #45 to #45 - antisocialtwilight (01/12/2012) [-]
Thanks, man! Great picture.
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User avatar #46 to #42 - antisocialtwilight (01/12/2012) [-]
Haha, thanks, man.
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User avatar #34 - DareDaShit (01/10/2012) [-]
I finished reading the first two chapters of your fan fic. I really like the idea! Can't wait for chapter 3!
Keep me updated!
User avatar #35 to #34 - antisocialtwilight (01/10/2012) [-]
Thanks, I'm actually hard at work on chapter 3 as we speak! This chapter stars Pinkamena. I'm taking a short break for dinner then I'll continue it.
User avatar #36 to #35 - DareDaShit (01/10/2012) [-]
Awsome!
Can't wait to see it!
User avatar #21 - appleboom (01/06/2012) [-]
Want the most recent issue of the newsletter?
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User avatar #8 to #7 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
I've got 2 chapters written and posted to fimfiction, if you'd like a link.

I'm still working on the pre-writing for the other 4.
Pinkie-This'll be pretty easy, I've got a plan for it, I just need to write it, but I am quite lazy.
Rarity-This'll be tricky, considering she was only not a designer because the things she made were not 'good enough'.
Fluttershy-I'm not sure how I'm going to write something like that, considering she would've been the same with or without the rainboom.
AJ-Same as pinkie, I just need to write it.
Any questions?
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User avatar #10 to #9 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
Well...nobody's really reviewed or commented..but last night someone said it was a cool twist on the story, so that's something.
Here's chapter 1,
www.fimfiction.net/story/60...
Let me know what you think!
#11 to #10 - malzahar **User deleted account** has deleted their comment [-]
#12 to #11 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
That would be great! I really think I just need more people to see it, because most people say it's a good idea.
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User avatar #14 to #13 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! You are awesome!
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User avatar #16 to #15 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
I actually never thought of Mass Messaging before. I have 37 because I went on an adding spree.

Okay, a few adding sprees, sue me. But thanks! I'll send a MM with a link to my story.
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User avatar #18 to #17 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
What newsletter?
#19 to #18 - malzahar **User deleted account** has deleted their comment [-]
User avatar #20 to #19 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
Oh, cool! I'll have to send him a friend request soon.
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User avatar #25 to #24 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
Dammit, I'm usually good with that, I'll edit it right now! Thanks for pointing that out, I hate making grammatical errors.
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User avatar #27 to #26 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
That is the plan, actually. After I write what happens to each pony after Dash fails, I'll be writing chapters in the same order for each pony. For example, Dash becomes friends with Gilda. How did Gilda get in prison if she was Dash's friend in the regular series? Yo'll find out. But Dash doesn't break out. She isn't stupid, and learned a valuable life lesson from jailtime. Mind if I spoil it? I'm excited.
#28 to #27 - malzahar **User deleted account** has deleted their comment [-]
User avatar #29 to #28 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
Okay, so this is what happens:
While Dash is racing, what normally happens is Gilda steals a wallet, and gets away with it because everyone is distracted with the rainboom. But since she didn't rainboom, she gets caught. And Dash joins the Cloudsdale PD after she is released, while Twilight meets a lonely Trixie. Trixie, who was pretty mean in the regular series, has Twilight as a best friend, so she becomes a much nicer pony, more timid. Meanwhile, Twilight becomes mean to everyone except Trixie.
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User avatar #32 to #23 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
We reached the reply limit, but yes, as best friends, they came to the decision to join the PD together.

Okay, later dude, and thanks for the help and support!
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User avatar #3 - mrgreatreturns (01/06/2012) [-]
Hey, are you liking the story so far?
User avatar #4 to #3 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
Well, to be honest, I like the idea, but there's continuity and grammatical issues which you should address. For example, Luna's been on the moon for thousands of years, so she couldn't have seen Trixie. Also, in chapter 2, you have thoughts in quotation marks, which could be confusing for some. Another thing, when doing thoughts or speech, you want to have a space between someone talking, and the paragraphs. Like this:
"blah blah blah" said Herp
"blah blah blah" Derp replied.
also put a space after that for the next paragraph.
Fix this stuff, and you should be much better off.
User avatar #5 to #4 - mrgreatreturns (01/06/2012) [-]
Oh... thanks...
User avatar #6 to #5 - antisocialtwilight (01/06/2012) [-]
You're welcome! And remember, the idea is good, but a lot of readers will stop reading if it doesn't look good, or if it's not easy to read. So keep up with the idea, but edit the chapters for quality.
User avatar #1 - schimpules (12/01/2011) [-]
woof woof
User avatar #2 to #1 - antisocialtwilight (12/02/2011) [-]
Pardon?
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