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Comments(200):
#80
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basanso (01/30/2013) [-]
Thought it was going to be a reference to SOAD - Mr. Jack.
But still I thumb :D
But still I thumb :D
#76
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N. Korean citizen (01/30/2013) [-]
how'd that get a 4chan 9/10. it was weak. New anon gives it 4/10. it was like call of duty without guns.
#74
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propervillain (01/30/2013) [-] 
**propervillain rolls 44** Here's my Dubs. Now magical fairy princess, please put newest uploads back on the bottom where it belongs.
#72
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tyraxio (01/30/2013) [-]
This was horrible. As many others have pointed out, you need to leave clues throughout the entire story. Also, probably most importantly, you're supposed to have the reference to actually BE PART OF THE STORY. Something along the lines of the boyfriend seeing Jack hitting on OP and go "Hit the road, Jack!" Or the boyfriends name being Jack and as he throws the other guy OP goes "He's going to hit the road, Jack!"
2/10. Wouldn't repost.
2/10. Wouldn't repost.
#71
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deepblackshaft ONLINE (01/30/2013) [-] hobit..................................................................
#69
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N. Korean citizen (01/30/2013) [-]
This is stupid. You're supposed to leave tie-ins to the punchline interspersed throughout the story. The only reference in this story is that his name is Jack. Nothing else in the story related to the punchline even remotely.
As an example of an awesome greentext, look to the story where the kid had a crush on his counselor and she was actually a bear. He talked about her eating salmon and berries, but it wasn't completely obvious until the punchline.
As an example of an awesome greentext, look to the story where the kid had a crush on his counselor and she was actually a bear. He talked about her eating salmon and berries, but it wasn't completely obvious until the punchline.
#68
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VaultTechy ONLINE (01/30/2013) [-] The story was unnecessarily dragged out when all it needed to be was some guy not being liked and hitting the road. And it was kind of a lackluster ending =/ but yeah, that was nice I guess.
#63
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thepyras (01/30/2013) [-] The story is supposed to build up to the song lyrics with pieces of information along the way. Any other story would have worked just as well so long as someone was named Jack.
#62
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davidjoneslive (01/30/2013) [-]
HEEY .. FAIL. I know this story was fail when
>have bf, 20 years old
>he'll go to ATM to get a few dollars for beers
no one in this fuckin story is over 21 which made me look immediately to the last 3 lines of the post to see what the song would be.
>have bf, 20 years old
>he'll go to ATM to get a few dollars for beers
no one in this fuckin story is over 21 which made me look immediately to the last 3 lines of the post to see what the song would be.
