Joy rapture, another one of these wastes of space.

Okay, let's go over why these are horrible:

Insipid art style that thinks it's cute despite drawing everyone missing numerous extremities and many of the details that make up an actual human being. Don't bullshit me about the it being chibi or whatever the fuck you want to call it: there are ways to make chibi art look good, and this isn't one of them.

The mouths are so bad they deserve their own point. A mouth does not take up half of somebody's fucking face, especially when you only condescend to let it exist half of the time. Additionally, when being complemented, a person does not make a D: face, okay? Like, holy fuck how do you even mix up the expressions for what amounts to a tragedy and comedy mask. That's literally the mistake someone would make if they had no idea how the human face looked.

The jokes (which I'm only using as a technical term; to call these jokes is an insult to everything good in the world) are non-existent. They're the kinds of things you would see on a Facebook wall or a Tumblr post.

The layout in this one was especially horrific. I cannot suss out how you managed to clutter up a comic with five panels and nine speech bubbles, but you found a way. The characters barely even say anything, and every panel is a fucking wall of text. Jesus Christ, make the speech bubbles smaller so that we can actually process what in the fuck is going on. You should not have upwards of 45% of most panels being speech bubbles.

Again, the art. I think (operative word being "think") that for the first four panels, the black-haired . . . person was imagining . . . her(?)self as being male. The person whom we've never seen before, don't know, and who looks really fucking feminine is supposed to be male? I shouldn't have to explain why this is stupid (assuming that I've even hit the right vein of interpretation, because there is zero clarity in the comic).

Also, "your's"? Fucking seriously?