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#3 - kez (07/30/2012) [-]
Yeah its decent. But it really sounds like you're trying to over sing it. And thats what put me off it. Doesnt sound right

User avatar #5 to #3 - southerncross ONLINE (07/30/2012) [-]
thanks for the advice mate
#4 to #3 - kez (07/30/2012) [-]
Oh, and kudos to having the balls to post this.

Should be proud of it but it does need work
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