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The Ghostie (Laugh at THIS)

 

My 2nd Brony track. I heard the beat and instantly thought of a ghost, so I built a tune around it, with the idea of a poltergeist, mocking Pinkie Pie.
I just started making music, and my name is pronounced "Jerkstep," because I'm a jackwagon and I know it.
Critique welcomed.
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Submitted: 04/05/2012
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#1 - samuraijesus (04/05/2012) [-]
**samuraijesus rolled a random image posted in comment #3367241 at FJ Pony Thread ** Dude Dats Diggity Dope Dawgy-Do
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User avatar #2 to #1 - therealpokemon [OP](04/05/2012) [-]
?
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User avatar #3 to #2 - samuraijesus (04/05/2012) [-]
**samuraijesus rolls 55** I dunno, so no worrries.
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User avatar #4 to #3 - therealpokemon [OP](04/05/2012) [-]
ALL HAIL THE MAGICAL DUBS
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User avatar #5 - cakebro (04/05/2012) [-]
interesting.
personally, i'd probably add some lead lines.
every music needs some melody.
only my personal opinion of course.
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User avatar #6 to #5 - therealpokemon [OP](04/05/2012) [-]
Hm. How exactly would you describe a melody?
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#7 to #6 - cakebro (04/05/2012) [-]
maybe i should clarify before i say something about what i think a melody is just to have you prove how your song had it.

I would just personally add a more... fluent? lead line.
the various non-percussive parts just didn't seem to add together harmonically.
it just kind of seemed like a collection of various samples.
and maybe that's the point, and i'm just old fashioned.
don't get me wrong, it was all mixed very well and everything.
anyways, as i said, this is all just my opinion.
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User avatar #8 to #7 - therealpokemon [OP](04/05/2012) [-]
Oh NO, please tell me if the sounds don't go together and where. I am mostly a logical guy, so music isn't my strong suit, which is why I need help. By all means give me criticism. You have no idea how much this helps me make better music. I'm working on one right now as a matter of fact.
 
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