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Fanfic Chapter 4 is Up!

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Submitted: 01/22/2012
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User avatar #5 - mizzycupcakes (01/22/2012) [-]
im not exactly sure what your looking for posting it on here.. a critique?.. uhm. it seems like a pretty good story. i have to say its a little bleak... im guessing thats kind of what you were aiming for.... idk. to me. its. a. little. chopped. up. like. this. and doesnt honestly flow well? but you captured the other ponies personalities almost to a t... almost. anyways. good job. keep writing. the more you write the better youll get!
#4 - ubertoaster (01/22/2012) [-]
**ubertoaster rolled a random image posted in comment #52 at need new pokemon? ** Cool Story, well written.
**ubertoaster rolled a random image posted in comment #52 at need new pokemon? ** Cool Story, well written.
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User avatar #1 - odawg (01/22/2012) [+] (1 reply)
good work
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