Cringeworthy at is best. not sure if troll, stupid or a little 6 years old girl. Princess D.) Neon Flutter Spectrum Dash is the daughter of Princess Luna and an it hurt so much help
Upload
Login or register

Cringeworthy at is best

Click to block a category:GamingPoliticsNewsComicsAnimeOther
 
Cringeworthy at is best. not sure if troll, stupid or a little 6 years old girl. Princess D.) Neon Flutter Spectrum Dash is the daughter of Princess Luna and an

not sure if troll, stupid or a little 6 years old girl

Tags: it | hurt | so | much | help
Princess D.) Neon Flutter Spectrum Dash is the daughter of Princess Luna
and an unknown stallion. She newer knew her dad because he abandoned her as a
foal and left her with her mother Princess Luna, who newer told her anything about
her father. She is the most powerful pony in Equestria as she inherited a lot of it
from her mother because the royal family is very powerful. She is the fastest flyer in
the whole of Equestria and is with Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Rarity,
Applejack, and her sister, Princess Twilight Sparkle. She owns the secret seventh
element of harmony which is the most powerful of all of them, the Element of
Awesomeness! She could defeat Chrysalis and her entire army easily with her magic
which was always the most powerful even when she was only a little foal, even so
much that Twilight Sparkle was amazed. She is amazing at anything she tries and
everypony byes her because she is so kind and clever, and helps everypony in need.
She can fight extremely well and could defeat with no injuries at all, except
for once where a part of her horn broke off and she became blind in one eye, but
she can still do her magic extremely well. She is the lead Wonderbolt and she could
do 10 Sonic P. in one go- She is also a D.) and is best friends with Vinyl
Scratch who she taught all her amazing skills, and her coltfriend is Soarin', and they
have three alicorn foals- Everypony byes her no matter what she does and she is her
aunt Princess Celestia's top student, achieving higher than any other pony but
Twilight Sparkle is still her best friend.
Brohoof . Comment - 15 minutes ago
...
+20
Views: 4997 Submitted: 10/04/2013
Hide Comments
Leave a comment Refresh Comments (65)
[ 65 comments ]
> hey anon, wanna give your opinion?
asd
#39 - liuur
Reply +5 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Nope.
#1 - octaviano
Reply +5 123456789123345869
(10/04/2013) [-]
#41 - kingdaniel
Reply +3 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Probably written by this guy
#10 - xgrandmoffx
Reply +3 123456789123345869
(10/04/2013) [-]
I can tell that this is satire because the image is hand crafted in an image editor, not an OC generator, and because the text is in a legible font. Also, the grammar is sound. Thumb for a parody of what some kids think is actually cool when posted on something other than the kitchen refrigerator.
User avatar #11 to #10 - mitchr
Reply +2 123456789123345869
(10/04/2013) [-]
By any chance have you heard of My Immortal, the infamous "worst" fanfiction?
User avatar #12 to #11 - xgrandmoffx
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/04/2013) [-]
I have not, how long is it?
User avatar #13 to #12 - mitchr
Reply +2 123456789123345869
(10/04/2013) [-]
44 chapters.
myimmortalrehost2.webs.com/

It is generally agreed to be the worst fanfiction ever written, and is either an ultimate master troll or a horrifying preteen girl who wrote it.
#60 to #13 - classlessfaggot
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/06/2013) [-]
I think I just caught retardation.
User avatar #14 to #13 - xgrandmoffx
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/04/2013) [-]
Thanks. I'm probably not going to get around to reading it, though.
User avatar #15 to #14 - mitchr
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/04/2013) [-]
Fair enough. It's horrible, absolutely terrible to the point that it is one of the funniest things ever written.
User avatar #43 to #13 - ButtonFly
Reply 0 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Well that made for an interesting couple of hours.
#59 to #43 - classlessfaggot
0 123456789123345869
has deleted their comment [-]
User avatar #23 to #13 - halotalim
Reply 0 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
I don't know. its bad, and I know I have made work better... but I have a friend that has written worse I believe.
User avatar #24 to #23 - mitchr
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
...
...
...
You obviously haven't gotten to the part where Snape and Wormtail are spying on her when she is naked in the bath and she pulls out the gun from where you might ask? Nobody Knows. and starts shooting at them at point blank range, still managing to miss.

Oh, and Harry Potter's dad is named Satan, and she travels back in time to meet him and they go to a Ye Olde Hotte Topicke.
I am not making that up. I swear to god. I am not making that up.
User avatar #25 to #24 - halotalim
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Okay so that is bad, but the wring style, the jumps in character introductions, the wording, and the way it is set up is just as bad as my friends work.
User avatar #26 to #25 - mitchr
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
But does your friend's writing focus on Harry Potter crossed with Satanism and (Angst^900andgoddamn1)?
User avatar #27 to #26 - halotalim
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
I think he tied to focus on the world of vandread, the anime.
User avatar #28 to #27 - mitchr
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Still better than goffik Harry Potter with angst and Dumbledore screaming "WHAT THE FUK R YU DOIN U MUTHERFUKERS!!!!!!"
My Immortal is generally agreed to be the worst fanfiction of all time. That's a pretty damn big distinction. Believe me, nothing approaches. Your friend still has hope, though; just tell him Or her to read more famous books and to keep practicing.
User avatar #29 to #28 - halotalim
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Yeah, he is one of those pig head guys that refuses to change how he stands in anything, Even RP's, if it will make his character look better than everyone else, just like him IRL.
User avatar #30 to #29 - mitchr
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Ah. I'm one of those people, only I am also very introspective, so I recognize what I am not good at and what I need to improve. Writing skills among them.

I take it you have several writing friends, then?
User avatar #31 to #30 - halotalim
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Mainly in Rping, but I try to do some writing and even started an MLP fan fic a while back. I actually have to finish the last few chapters of it.
User avatar #32 to #31 - mitchr
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Ah. I specialize mostly in worldbuilding, though, seeing as I've been writing only since January of this year, I don't really have anything that is good yet.

Well, that is unfair. I can come up with innovative ideas pretty easily. But other than that, not too much- yet.
User avatar #33 to #32 - halotalim
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Me to, I have a very innovative mind and lie to put heavy on the characters self struggles. Probably my favorite character I have worked with so far was one I dreamed up named Kelly.
User avatar #34 to #33 - mitchr
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Oh? Tell me about them a bit. I could share a world in response, too, I suppose. Might be able to learn a bit back and forth or something, ya never know.
User avatar #35 to #34 - halotalim
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Slave girl for 7 years with scars around her eyes from a punishment who escaped and is taking vengence upon her salvers. She is in the military and has a disease that does not allow her to grow beyond 13 years old, even though she is 42. She hunts and kills her task-masters and her ex-slave friend who became a worker for the slavers. She is an excellent interrogator driven forward by the need for revenge and the will to avenge her familys death at their hands. She only listens to one person, her commander and she is feared by even generals for her seeming disregard for lives that she picked up in slavery,

Sorry for the cliffnotes version of her character. I had more and my computer shut down.
User avatar #36 to #35 - mitchr
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Ah. Sounds like a pretty interesting character, actually.
As for my world... Which one... Screw it, superuniverse.
So I am constructing a superuniverse to contain everything I write within it's boundaries. The narrator is essentially God, with hints being dropped everywhere about that. Or rather, he's the god of our superuniverse.
There are three classes of beings. Humanity is a larval stage- very few ascend past it to something greater. There are Artisans, those who create new universes within the superuniverse (to be exact, they do so in the Null, the 0th dimension, where everything is perspective and nothing exists and basically it's a massive =1). Then there are Origins, those who destroy. Creation and Destruction, the opposite sides of the same coin. Then there is the one who is born only once in billions upon billions of years, signalling an end to that superuniverse, and all universes within it- a god. When a god ascends, their universe shatters and falls apart behind them, and life is born anew before them.
Our universe is contained within the superuniverse- it is one of the four 'pillar universes', the first four created. It is our own, the world of Seraphim (winged humans with incredible power), the world of Atlantis (a fully magnetic world where there is only a single city left, floating on the currents created by a magnetic liquid called Eitr), and then the world of Carbon. That world is where three of the Artisans and one Origin were from- the Origins are not inherently evil; Rhodes Argyris, descended from Silver Argyris of the Three Artisans, wields her power over destruction for creation.

As for character, Caelia/Haven is my favorite. I'll put that in a followup, because this has less than 250 characters left.
User avatar #38 to #36 - mitchr
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
Caelia is a girl who lived on Atlantis. Her and her best friend James went off on a journey, for whatever reason, and ended up awakening the Origin. The first one. He was a destroyer, a murderer, a killer- he obliterated for naught more than amusement. He killed James and left. When Caelia left the core after this, she saw the US attack Atlantis see, Atlantis was technologically advanced; they posed a threat. . She watched the ancient city of metal fall from the sky.
She changed her name to Haven- the title of the leader of Atlantis- and travelled with two of the survivors, Rai and Seven, to stop the Origin.
This led her across a multitude of civilizations, picking up characters allies along the way.
Basically, by the end, when Rhodes ascends and uses her full power to fight the Origin, she is a punk rebel with a badass jacket, Ramones shirt, such.
User avatar #37 to #36 - halotalim
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
cool.

The fan fic I said I was writing only has 2 original characters and I am ending them as soon as I finish the story.
User avatar #19 to #13 - thefogwoggler
Reply 0 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
oh god i couldn't finish it it was so amazingly awful
User avatar #20 to #19 - mitchr
Reply 0 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/DrinkingGame/MyImmortal

I'll chip in money for your grave, how about that?
User avatar #49 to #20 - thefogwoggler
Reply 0 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
do you want me to ******* die?
#2 - worshippingbensho
Reply +2 123456789123345869
(10/04/2013) [-]
nothing but an abomination...
#46 - mondprinzessin
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
User avatar #40 - twotruckshavingsex
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
I have an OC named Midnight Shimmer *No relation to Sunset Shimmer.* and she's a unicorn zebra mix, basically she's just a zebra with a unicorn horn...her only friend is Zecora and she doesn't get out much. I don't know her talent yet, I was thinking of making her talent being able to stay quiet for long periods of time.
#18 - chozoscout
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/05/2013) [-]
looks like lisa frank vomited!
#6 - bronyfluttershy
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/04/2013) [-]
wut.
#5 - sirofminorclass
Reply +1 123456789123345869
(10/04/2013) [-]
Comment Picture