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Submitted: 03/16/2012
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#1 - haker (03/16/2012) [+] (12 replies)
User avatar #19 - haker (03/16/2012) [+] (4 replies)
great story so far. very well written

though I have noticed a few errors, minor, just thought I'd point them out.
I'll try to only post parts of the sentences to avoid spoilers.

there was one in either chapter 4 or 5, I'll try to find it later but I wasn't sure about that one.
chapter 8 paragraph 2-she had gotten over the temporary loss of her them.

User avatar #22 to #21 - luciluck (03/16/2012) [-]
there should be 2 new ones by tomorrow if the author will do as im telling him and get to it...i have to crack the editing whip every now and then :p
#16 - ddable (03/16/2012) [+] (2 replies)
one great fanfic. the feels,........... brohoof.
User avatar #14 - XXBIOHAZARDXX (03/16/2012) [+] (3 replies)
This is one hell of a fanfic I must say, As a Christian, I would still like the story even though It turns out RD goes lesbian for AJ (not finished readig)
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