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The Monster Under the Bed - 60

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Submitted: 12/06/2015
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User avatar #4 - muffincannibal (12/06/2015) [-]
Just as bad as furry fanfics.
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User avatar #79 to #4 - srskate (12/07/2015) [-]
i agree
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User avatar #50 to #4 - muffincannibal (12/07/2015) [-]
CAN'T STOP THE OPINION TRAIN.
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User avatar #52 to #50 - manout (12/07/2015) [-]
A trains useless without any tracks
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#53 to #52 - muffincannibal (12/07/2015) [-]
Here's your opinion train tracks.
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#68 to #53 - stupidpiglets (12/07/2015) [-]
can i have the cow?
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#69 to #68 - muffincannibal (12/07/2015) [-]
We're good.
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#70 to #69 - stupidpiglets (12/07/2015) [-]
yaaaay
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User avatar #61 to #4 - closotezuka (12/07/2015) [-]
no fun allowed -muffincannibal -2016
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User avatar #62 to #61 - muffincannibal (12/07/2015) [-]
Just because I hate one thing you consider fun, doesn't mean I am banning you from enjoying life. Drama Queen.
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#77 to #62 - captnpl (12/07/2015) [-]
"...I am banning you from enjoying life." -Muffincannibal
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User avatar #78 to #77 - muffincannibal (12/07/2015) [-]
This must be how it feels to be a politic.
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User avatar #63 to #62 - closotezuka (12/07/2015) [-]
never said you were

im just expressing my discontent with you expressing your discontent with something for no reason
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User avatar #64 to #63 - muffincannibal (12/07/2015) [-]
Because I hate it. Why should I have another reason?
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User avatar #65 to #64 - closotezuka (12/07/2015) [-]
because saying negative things with no criticism is meaningless
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User avatar #66 to #65 - muffincannibal (12/07/2015) [-]
I disagree with that comment, and I am offering no constructive criticism. faggot.
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User avatar #6 to #4 - semilunarknight (12/06/2015) [-]
Shut your whore mouth
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#8 to #6 - amuzen ONLINE (12/06/2015) [-]
I mean it is, if you consider furries to be inheritly bad then this is 'just as' bad. Can't judge one without judging the other.

That being said I personally don't think Furries are all that bad. Fur suits are... strange mind you but there's nothing wrong with furries.
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User avatar #9 to #8 - semilunarknight (12/06/2015) [-]
I see your point.
It's not hurting anyone though so there's no reason to go maximum autism with a side of anger issues.
I guess the same can be said for furries.
Fur suits freak me the **** out though.
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#11 to #9 - amuzen ONLINE (12/06/2015) [-]
fur suits just look off putting to me. Feels like you need a pretty large leap of imagination to find em sexy.
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User avatar #13 to #9 - falanvaul (12/06/2015) [-]
I'm a furry and fur suits freak me out too..

I'd never ******* wear one, spare for if I'm being given money to do it.
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User avatar #21 to #13 - bloodmadnertwo (12/06/2015) [-]
Furries are 100% A-OK, just the poor autistic furries who make it a lifestyle weird me out. it's like having a foot feteish and fearing a foot costume everywhere.
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User avatar #22 to #21 - falanvaul (12/06/2015) [-]
Wish more people had your mind set.

People prefer just jumping on the hate wagon and telling us to "Yiff in hell"
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User avatar #23 to #22 - bloodmadnertwo (12/06/2015) [-]
I have literally 0 right to judge others for their fetish', i have my own weird ones.
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User avatar #24 to #23 - falanvaul (12/06/2015) [-]
I mean, a good example for a bad furry is Whitekitten.

Please, do not look that up. Gore, blood, lots of **** thats just pretty ****** up.
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#81 to #13 - thesinful ONLINE (12/07/2015) [-]
Love good furry and scaly porn but totally not going to wear a costume without getting paid. Most furry/scaly comics I can take and leave but a few are pretty awesome like this one.
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User avatar #18 to #9 - RyudenTamarashi (12/06/2015) [-]
I concur with mister Falanvaul.

furry/scaly =/= fursuits or bestiality

also, is yo picture the Boros symbol from MTG?
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User avatar #19 to #18 - falanvaul (12/06/2015) [-]
Hm?
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User avatar #47 to #8 - qnamanmanga (12/07/2015) [-]
To be honest I agree in one way. I've seen some **** like diaper furries. Etc. And some comics about sonic's ocs. That's pure source of autism.

But there's a bunch of very good artists, who posess incredible skills like wolfy-nail , miles_db and they are Gods for me. I would like draw like they can.
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User avatar #7 to #6 - muffincannibal (12/06/2015) [-]
Nah, this is complete **** .
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User avatar #31 to #7 - warlordstuart ONLINE (12/06/2015) [-]
I actually don't think it's very good either. Really, the only thing it has going for it is the moderately interesting character designs and the coloring.

The story is completely ripped off from little monsters, the kid's relationship with his parents are...actually really gross (seriously, he referred to his dad by the sex nickname his mom gave him...on purpose...), The boy/girl monster sex relationship is really just a dumb fantasy of having a cute girl live with you under your bed.

This really isn't good or original...

However, my wife and I released our own garbage webcomic that doesn't look NEARLY as good as this, so who am I to say what people can or cannot enjoy?
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User avatar #75 to #31 - muffincannibal (12/07/2015) [-]
Enjoy it, hate, praise it, scorn, do whatever. I'm just gonna say what I wanna say, and hope nobody gets too serious about. That hope I had, has being diminished.
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#39 to #16 - anon (12/06/2015) [-]
you do realize that works both ways right? he can not like something and you can **** off and not bother him
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#67 to #39 - blackbolter ONLINE (12/07/2015) [-]
Your opinion.
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User avatar #71 to #67 - muffincannibal (12/07/2015) [-]
Rude
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User avatar #72 to #71 - blackbolter ONLINE (12/07/2015) [-]
Rude to anon or you?
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User avatar #73 to #72 - muffincannibal (12/07/2015) [-]
Are you purposely neglecting proper grammar?
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#80 to #39 - thepizzadevourer (12/07/2015) [-]
eh
I didn't seek out something he liked and then tell him how much it sucked.
People are free to dislike stuff, and constructive criticism is always a good thing. But if you see something a bunch of people like and your only contribution is "I don't like it" you're just being a party pooper.
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User avatar #17 to #16 - muffincannibal (12/06/2015) [-]
Yup.
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#40 to #38 - anon (12/06/2015) [-]
>hate on furfag ****
>user named pony replies

**** off trash. hes free to hate what he wants and voice his opinion for that hate
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#42 to #40 - anon (12/06/2015) [-]
and hes free to hate hate
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User avatar #54 to #40 - godofsteak (12/07/2015) [-]
he's free to voice his opinion about his opinion
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User avatar #44 to #40 - thunderpony (12/07/2015) [-]
yeah, well at least I don't have to be an anon when I post my hate
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#10 - lordsepulchure (12/06/2015) [-]
I love these so much.
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#20 - kloudianorici (12/06/2015) [-]
These comics are exceptionally satisfying.
Keep it up m8. I r8 8/8.
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User avatar #3 - needsauceadmisblan (12/06/2015) [-]
oh this means we get to see more of were shes from right? sounds fun.
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User avatar #25 - jiveguru [OP](12/06/2015) [-]
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#26 to #25 - insanefreak (12/06/2015) [-]
No offense OP, but I think half of FJ already saw your update.
We may or may not be stalking you.
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User avatar #27 to #26 - jiveguru [OP](12/06/2015) [-]
Maybe, but I was waaaay too tired to update my mentions list last night before I fell asleep. Just putting it up now to make sure.
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User avatar #37 to #27 - eggsontoast (12/06/2015) [-]
You can remove me too. Ive subbed. Keep up the good work.
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User avatar #32 to #27 - faggotishshit ONLINE (12/06/2015) [-]
You can remove me from the mentions list, I'm subscribed anyway so I see when you post something the moment you do.
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User avatar #43 to #25 - bgskamikaze (12/07/2015) [-]
can i get a mention
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#34 - phantompaladin ONLINE (12/06/2015) [-]
**phantompaladin used "*roll picture*"**
**phantompaladin rolled image**will this ever have tiddies
like
im waiting for tiddies
but theres no tiddies
so why am I reading it
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User avatar #57 to #34 - jiveguru [OP](12/07/2015) [-]
If that's all you want then I have no idea why either. *shrug*
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User avatar #35 to #34 - youngneil ONLINE (12/06/2015) [-]
There were mom titties and demon titties near the beginning iirc.
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User avatar #12 - chaosraptor (12/06/2015) [-]
**chaosraptor rolled user tenaciouslee ** lives under my bed

i dont mind... just the ****** wont pay rent
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User avatar #28 to #12 - tenaciouslee ONLINE (12/06/2015) [-]
It's because I make no shekels, goyim.
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#59 - anon (12/07/2015) [-]
So when do we get to see them **** ?
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User avatar #60 to #59 - jiveguru [OP](12/07/2015) [-]
*Taps Chin* Hmmm... Chapter 4? *Shrug*
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#5 - numbahone (12/06/2015) [-]
Aww yeah, love me some midnight updates. I need more of this, like now, haha. Ty for posting!
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User avatar #1 - lerotheumbrella (12/06/2015) [-]
this satisfies me to an ungodly end
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User avatar #2 to #1 - lerotheumbrella (12/06/2015) [-]
keep it up jiveguru
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User avatar #15 - crazyguyindahood (12/06/2015) [-]
where are the mentions?
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User avatar #14 - fireheartt (12/06/2015) [-]
IDemandAnother.masterpiece
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User avatar #45 - goddamnwizard (12/07/2015) [-]
Yeah I tried to read this but I just can't. It's such a blatant self-insert written by a fourteen year old. Dude's eighteen but still living with his parents (I know most eighteen year olds do, but this choice says to me that the author can't write outside of their own experience) but acting like a child, while still having sex with the improbably hot monster girl that loves him for no other reason than because he's the main character. It's just... A juvenile daydream that someone actually wrote out.
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User avatar #55 to #45 - jiveguru [OP](12/07/2015) [-]
“It's just a day dream that somebody actually wrote out”... just like every fiction story ever created.
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User avatar #82 to #55 - goddamnwizard (12/07/2015) [-]
You missed the critical word "juvenile." Good authors actually take the time to refine their work before showing it to the public.
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User avatar #83 to #82 - jiveguru [OP](12/08/2015) [-]
Usually I don't give a **** when people don't care about my work, whatever man. I get it. What I don't get is the reasoning you give.

“Dude's 18, but still living with his parents.” So what? Is that really a problem? I mean, in the very next sentence you point out that most 18 year olds do still live at home yourself. I didn't completely move out directly after high school finished I moved out when I was 22. So what?

I don't understand why that is a reason to zero in on?

And as for the 'no reason why she loves him, other than he's the protagonist' bit. You do realize that the entire story is telling just how that came to be, and is still currently in progress, right?

You can't judge an incomplete work like that. You don't have all the facts, not that you would, since you couldn't even bother due to the fact that Tim is 18 and still living at home apparently.

I've had the self-insert thing thrown at me before, and honestly that doesn't bother me if people think that. I've made peace with the fact that some folks just will not be convinced otherwise. I would just like to say that it isn't any sort of self-insert fantasy though, just for the record. I'm not sure why some people think that, perhaps it's just an artifact of having the sorry be narrated to the audience by the main character.

I have no clue.

Anyway, I probably am just wasting my time, so, sorry you don't like my story. I know it's not for everyone and I never claimed it was, nor do I ever recall claiming to be a good author. I'm just happy that anyone is reading my work at all.

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User avatar #84 to #83 - goddamnwizard (12/08/2015) [-]
Let me try to rephrase what I mean. It's juvenile writing dealing with mature subject matter and that combination irks me. Obviously not everyone has that issue. And I did tell you why I mentioned the eighteen year old living with his parents. It's that it feels like someone writing from inexperience, but since you've moved out, then I guess that's just a stylistic choice. Self inserts bother most people because they're lazy, and also tend to be cringey. And yes, I realize that it's a work in progress, but when his first interaction with this strange being with unknown motives is to begin flirting with her, well, that's weak writing in my opinion. But hey, by all means keep writing it. That's how you improve. I wish you the best of luck with it
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#51 - unfitninjuh ONLINE (12/07/2015) [-]
>mfw new One Punch Man and Monster Under the Bed

This is why I love weekends
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User avatar #49 - kibbleking (12/07/2015) [-]
How come you're not posting ****** jokes with semidecent artstyles like the rest of the "oc comic makers?"
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User avatar #48 - kibbleking (12/07/2015) [-]
You ******* goy. Where are the jews?
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User avatar #56 to #48 - jiveguru [OP](12/07/2015) [-]
I'm sorry, I don't understand what you mean.
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#46 - rekttt (12/07/2015) [-]
**rekttt used "*roll picture*"**
**rekttt rolled image**
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User avatar #41 - sanbonzakura (12/06/2015) [-]
them tree better end up *******
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User avatar #36 - thesunpraiser (12/06/2015) [-]
God I can't wait for this to progress so we get more tits.
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User avatar #33 - mrbrown (12/06/2015) [-]
the comic never explained why she stole his socks
i'm curious, does she have a secret sock stash? probably built a nest, like birds with trash and poop
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User avatar #58 to #33 - jiveguru [OP](12/07/2015) [-]
It'll all come out eventually. I know the internet doesn't like to hear that though.
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