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Woo! This is our first multi-panel comic! And the introducing out two main characters. Thaddeus the Skeleton and Jimothy P. Widdlestien the Zombie... There story shall be told through many hilarious comics. Yes I do realize Wist had a little trouble with the skeleton in the second panel but just let it slide, they're not to easy to draw I'm told haha.
I also apologize that you have to enlarge it to view properly.
Welp I hope you guys enjoy! ...more »
Woo! This is our first multi-panel comic! And the introducing out two main characters. Thaddeus the Skeleton and Jimothy P. Widdlestien the Zombie... There story shall be told through many hilarious comics. Yes I do realize Wist had a little trouble with the skeleton in the second panel but just let it slide, they're not to easy to draw I'm told haha.
I also apologize that you have to enlarge it to view properly.
Welp I hope you guys enjoy!
Please leave comments telling me what you think!
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#9
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sotsog (08/12/2012) [+]
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This looks like it'll be interesting and a great start for the first strip. You may want to reconsider your layout though. I consider FJ users to be fast pace, so first impressions are incredibly important with a comic.
If it is not immedietly legible i would expect the average user to just skip instead of taking that extra effort to increase the image size. Gotta remember, people are very lazy. Your current layout shrinks in down far to much so 2x2 panel or single panels might work a little better. I personally prefer a horizontal layout but since FJ shrinks it down to about 500 pixels from your original 1600 it's pretty noticeable. You might wan't to check out scott mcclouds ideas on comic layouts made specifically for viewing online. I would suggest keeping to that layout and posting them on your own website or someplace like drunkduck and just cut it up in photoshop into a horizonatal comic for sites like FJ.
After blowing up your image the font was still barely legible for a comic that takes up practically my entire screen. It looks like your comics will focus mainly on dialogue so you're gonna want to remedy that right away. Aside from those things your joke works great, I look forward to seeing more.
If it is not immedietly legible i would expect the average user to just skip instead of taking that extra effort to increase the image size. Gotta remember, people are very lazy. Your current layout shrinks in down far to much so 2x2 panel or single panels might work a little better. I personally prefer a horizontal layout but since FJ shrinks it down to about 500 pixels from your original 1600 it's pretty noticeable. You might wan't to check out scott mcclouds ideas on comic layouts made specifically for viewing online. I would suggest keeping to that layout and posting them on your own website or someplace like drunkduck and just cut it up in photoshop into a horizonatal comic for sites like FJ.
After blowing up your image the font was still barely legible for a comic that takes up practically my entire screen. It looks like your comics will focus mainly on dialogue so you're gonna want to remedy that right away. Aside from those things your joke works great, I look forward to seeing more.
