A Little Movie Moment: Chapter:1 Part: 2. Part 2 to the chapter. Might take a break for a little while to revise for an exam. Stay tuned~.. Oh man, where to start. You can almost feel the cliches in this one. You are so bad at putting together a story worth reading or feeling for, you're just stretc
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A Little Movie Moment: Chapter:1 Part: 2

Part 2 to the chapter. Might take a break for a little while to revise for an exam.
Stay tuned~

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#46 - dalokan ONLINE (08/05/2014) [+] (16 replies)
Oh man, where to start.

You can almost feel the cliches in this one. You are so bad at putting together a story worth reading or feeling for, you're just stretching for every single sad cliche out there.

"Broken Dream," "Broken Social Development" and "Broken Anus."

It doesn't make it sad, it makes me laugh. You're making the most ridiculous Mary Sue of "sadness," to put it lightly.

Hell, you can't even abuse these cliches properly. You're just trying to cram as much sad stuff as you can in each panel in order to force feels.

2/10 go back to making softcore porn comics
#10 - implosay ONLINE (08/05/2014) [+] (18 replies)
Gearboy, I warned you on your previous content. If you value your anal cavity just a little bit...
#62 - swagloon (08/05/2014) [+] (3 replies)
For **** sake. Probably the funniest thing on FJ today is how work up you people are in the comments. Really this made you sad? God forbid you actually see something sad for real; you guys would probably kill yourselves out of depression.

This is so full of cliches this it makes it far from sad and all are forced. In fact I can probably predict a bit of part 3. She falls in love with a fellow soldier and he ******* dies; oh no her life is **** boo hoo.

Also Gearboy, those are the most anime eyes ever; and that's not a good thing. Everything else as improve except for the eyes.
#68 - EdwardNigma (08/05/2014) [+] (8 replies)
>Military lets her still put on makeup like that
>Still lets her have hair like that (Do armies make girls cut their hair? Seems like they should, or at the least, hair like that.)
>Man enough to join the military, still cuts self in it.
>Girl sleeps in same area as the men

I still feel no sympathy.
#59 - diablojoe (08/05/2014) [+] (2 replies)
>Gets up after all the other troops
>Cuts self
>Mascara and eye liner
>Untidy hair
>Pink Hair bobble
>Big chunky glasses
>Lack of body armour
>Lack of helmet

0/10 would not operate with

I still want to see where this is going though. Keep it up.
#55 - sienimies (08/05/2014) [+] (3 replies)
Soo is she gonna grow massive tits or something
#49 - kingdaniel (08/05/2014) [+] (3 replies)
Oh shiet, those are the people from that long comic you did a while ago.
#73 - megavoir (08/05/2014) [-]
i will post this everytime
#133 - MrDeadiron ONLINE (08/05/2014) [+] (1 reply)
Please, you lose fans with your unfunny "plot" ******** and now you're using every abuse cliche in the book just so we'll be sympathetic to your character and give you thumbs. No. **** you.
#69 - nefarian (08/05/2014) [+] (1 reply)
You're getting overwhelmed by feels because one character, whom you've seen in one earlier comic, is getting raped by her dad? Have you ever read a book or watched a movie when a character with actual developement has been raped? Earth forbid you'd ever witness that.
#85 - userwithoutaname (08/05/2014) [-]
This seems like Tumblr feminist **** . Sure, whats happening is bad... But just look.

"Awh, shes a cute young girl! How sweet!

Wait, her piggy bank is broken! How sad AWH AND IT HAD PARIS WRITTEN ON IT TOO! SHE HAD A DREAM! D:

Oh, the father is a druggy, Typical >

And shes abused! This is triggering me!

Oh look at the scars! She cuts because she hurts!

She joined the Army! You're a strong independent woman! You go girl!"

Its even got the sickening Faux Anime art style that people use when they cant ******* draw anything else. "It's an art style!... I can't draw anything else, so i'll just bastardise this art style, its cool."
#174 - zerith (08/05/2014) [-]
That was so ******* stupid.
User avatar #155 - misticalz ONLINE (08/05/2014) [+] (3 replies)
Implying she'd be in a military
>hair
>glasses
>self abuse scars
>mental unstableness
#13 - Kirbyman (08/05/2014) [-]
I'm invested you son of a bitch.

Continue.
User avatar #108 - Turtleboner (08/05/2014) [-]
de part deux
de gerl is sed agen, de pigee bank is de broke by de ded, den de gerl get older and de ded puts de peepee in de poop shoot, de gerl is sed bcuz rape, de gerl cut self bcuz unhappy with life, de gerl join armed force and shoot children. de end.
User avatar #38 - teoanon ONLINE (08/05/2014) [-]
How the **** can you all get so worked up about this? **** all of you are probably going to forget about this little story in like a week after it ends.
#221 - cactusupthebutt (08/05/2014) [+] (2 replies)
It takes a special kind of monster to do that to your daughter
#223 to #222 - cactusupthebutt (08/05/2014) [-]
Stop making me laugh! I'm angry dammit!
Stop making me laugh! I'm angry dammit!
User avatar #64 - antiponiesuser (08/05/2014) [+] (1 reply)
if this **** ends by her dying at the hands of a 12 years old in CoD i really will laugh like I wouldnt have seen it veforehand.
User avatar #61 - faggotville ONLINE (08/05/2014) [+] (1 reply)
So we all complain about Tumblr then we all support this comic that is just a mess of issues? Seriously what is this?
#29 - ipostcp (08/05/2014) [+] (11 replies)
I don't really like to talk about myself like this, but the post seems relavent enough to go into detail. I felt I should post my story though.

>Be me
>Living with my mom
>Dirt poor, barely enough to eat with 2 brothers, a sister and mom and her husband
>Brothers both have anger problems and my sister is a huge whore
>I'm literally the only one getting A's in school and attending regularly
>My brothers steal my things and beat me simply because I don't do what they say
>Lock myself in my room every day after school
>School was the only fun thing in my life at the time, I have friends, popular, teachers loved me as well as students
>Eventually start hanging out with a kid after school named Ryan
>We eventually start having sleep overs and **** , best friends, but he was a little more rebel than me
>We eventually dip into weed and start doing bad stuff after hours
>Throwing eggs at houses and petty vandalism
>One night we decide to do a break and enter and trash the house
>3 days later cops show up and get charged with breaking and entering x 2, trespassingx2, damage over 5000$, damage under5000$
cont
User avatar #33 to #32 - ipostcp (08/05/2014) [-]
>I'm still under probation for my break and enter so my dad calls the cops on me if I'm not right home after school
>Have no social life, because of this. No friends to play with. Just school and home.
>Beats me and touches and stuff
>This goes on for about 3 years, almost every day
>No time for friends at all except school, but I was depressed so nobody talked to me
>Attempt suicide a few times
>Woke up with a tube in my mouth and nurses around me
>Teachers ask me what happened and they are suspicious but I tell them otherwise
>Really want to go back with my mom, but she must hate me for what I did
cont.
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