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Two Sentence Stories #9

 
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Two Sentence Stories #9. Wow talk about highs and lows! Last comp didn't even break 50 thumbs while the one before it set my record. Hope this one is closer to

Wow talk about highs and lows! Last comp didn't even break 50 thumbs while the one before it set my record. Hope this one is closer to the middle or higher! Like I said I'm posting early this week out of respect for those who lost their lives on and after 9/11. I'll probably be posting another bonus comp soon since I broke 100 followers across the board this week. Also I'm posting new stories daily on my website for the month of October and launching a two-sentence story writing contest on the first so I'm hoping you all submit. As always let me know what you guys think and how I can improve.


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Two Sentence Stories #9. Wow talk about highs and lows! Last comp didn't even break 50 thumbs while the one before it set my record. Hope this one is closer to
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Two Sentence Stories #9. Wow talk about highs and lows! Last comp didn't even break 50 thumbs while the one before it set my record. Hope this one is closer to
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Two Sentence Stories #9. Wow talk about highs and lows! Last comp didn't even break 50 thumbs while the one before it set my record. Hope this one is closer to
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Two Sentence Stories #9. Wow talk about highs and lows! Last comp didn't even break 50 thumbs while the one before it set my record. Hope this one is closer to

+50 Thumbs for More or -25 to Stop

Previous Comps:
Some Two Sentence Stories (#1) - /channel/morbid-channel/Some+two+sentenc e+stories/XtecLKg/
More Two Sentence Stories (#2) -/channel/morbid-channel/More+two+senten ce+stories/funny-pictures/5625063/
Two Sentence Stories #3 - /channel/morbid-channel/Two+sentence+sto ries+3/dzpcLqm/
Two Sentence Stories - One Month! (Bonus Comp) - /channel/morbid-channel/Two+sentence+sto ries+one+month/pmTdLcz/
Two Sentence Stories #4 - /channel/morbid-channel/Two+sentence+sto ries+4/GnTdLTa/
Two Sentence Stories #5 - /channel/morbid-channel/Two+sentence+sto ries+5/anTdLna/
Two Sentence Stories #6 - /channel/morbid-channel/Two+sentence+sto ries+6/bnTdLoa/
Two Sentence Stories #7 - /channel/morbid-channel/Two+sentence+sto ries+7/BogdLOb/
Two Sentence Stories #8 - channel/morbid-channel/Two+sentence+stor ies+8/wqjdLjd/
Two Sentence Stories #9 - This one!
Two Sentence Stories #10 - Will be released on 09/18

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Submitted: 09/11/2015
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#3 - anon (09/11/2015) [-]
Great ideas but poor grammar. A lot of these have been full of shameless run on sentences in an attempt to keep your promise of two sentences.
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User avatar #4 - recoveryone (09/11/2015) [-]
"Once, nearby telescopes listened for a message from the stars. Now, these silos contain our prepared response."
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User avatar #11 to #4 - shitshitshit (11/21/2015) [-]
some times i wounder if the cold war was a cover up
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User avatar #5 to #4 - motherfuckingkenji (09/11/2015) [-]
For the longest time, I thought that meant the silos had servers and **** that hold ******** of communications data ready to respond to a message with.
But nah man, nukes.
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User avatar #1 - zealotgold (09/11/2015) [-]
I always see these at work and I love them
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#2 to #1 - btschweitzer [OP](09/11/2015) [-]
Thanks! Glad you enjoy them!
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User avatar #9 - justsomechickyo (09/20/2015) [-]
I gotta give you props yo.... getting better

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#10 to #9 - btschweitzer [OP](09/20/2015) [-]
Thanks for saying so. Truthfully though we are still in the first batch of stories I wrote out a few months ago. Suppose I'm just getting better at editing lol. What did you think of Comp 10?
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User avatar #6 - greyhoundfd ONLINE (09/11/2015) [-]
Your last one got no thumbs because all the stories were "Look at this bizarre thing, IT'S BECAUSE HE'S A SPOOKY GHOST!"

These are much better.
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User avatar #8 - foamytesquirrel ONLINE (09/11/2015) [-]
You can't use hyphens to put sentences together - that's cheating- shame on you, op.
 
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