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The Little Girl

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Submitted: 01/07/2012
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User avatar #21 - gohanpicolo (01/08/2012) [+] (9 replies)
um if the creature had to kill and take the skin to inpersonate someone then how is the mother still alive? because the creature called from down stairs and the real mother was up stairs unless there were 2 creatures that already killed the mother and one was in the closet hiding and the other down stairs
#36 - rubenesquetony (01/08/2012) [+] (3 replies)
No offence, and sorry if you're not wanting a critique, but you've ruined a perfectly good creepy pasta story.

I recall reading the original version where the mom just grabs her and they hide before the end, which is ******* terrifying because what the thing and their fate is remains unknown. By adding descriptions of the monster, it isn't scary anymore because you're too descriptive, thus only scaring those with the specific fear of tentacled monsters and a man who bleeds.

TL;DR - it was fine the way it was, you've destroyed it by removing the suspense and mystery.
#20 - comecsrock (01/08/2012) [-]
ive seen enough hentai
ive seen enough hentai
#1 - wyckedphobia (01/07/2012) [+] (6 replies)
or his kid who's name escapes me right now
User avatar #32 - artenega (01/08/2012) [+] (2 replies)
The story was better before it expanded. It was more ambiguous. The original ended at "I hear it too"
User avatar #19 - kyuukaku (01/08/2012) [-]
FINALLY SOMEONE EXPANDED THE STORY!
#41 - ohdamnlol (01/09/2012) [-]
um... o__o...
um... o__o...
#29 - vivalared (01/08/2012) [-]
Legit.
Legit.
User avatar #11 - ThatOneDouche (01/08/2012) [+] (1 reply)
Description made me lol.
User avatar #4 - RedPurpleRain (01/07/2012) [+] (3 replies)
I've heard the beginning before, but never the part about the father. Nice.
#12 - SrslyIdgaf (01/08/2012) [+] (4 replies)
waiiiiiit a second.   
   
So if this creature has to slaughter and then skin the human that it wants to impersonate, then how the hell was the real mom alive while this creature was trying to lure the daughter upstairs?   
   
Or am I reading this wrong, and the creature simply wants to kill the family and can change forms at will just to 						****					 with them?   
   
I'm confused.
waiiiiiit a second.

So if this creature has to slaughter and then skin the human that it wants to impersonate, then how the hell was the real mom alive while this creature was trying to lure the daughter upstairs?

Or am I reading this wrong, and the creature simply wants to kill the family and can change forms at will just to **** with them?

I'm confused.
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#9 - StarvedSouthKorean (01/08/2012) [+] (1 reply)
The kitchen is upstairs? :/

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