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#1 - damaiuo
Reply -4
(03/28/2013) [-]
Storys that depict the head charater as the reader don't make sence many times and a pretty bad.. and are not scare, just anoying... If it hade been a third person, they perhaps would creep a bit... Bit not as first person... never as first person, unless you can do something other then read.

otherwise, never give up. just try new things.
#5 to #1 - sprog
Reply 0
(03/29/2013) [-]
it's actually written in second person
#2 to #1 - biblioklept
Reply +5
(03/29/2013) [-]
You could work on your English yourself, bub.
#3 to #2 - damaiuo
Reply -3
(03/29/2013) [-]
Perhaps, but english is not my first languish.

And i was writing about how a "You are" story was not that a good idea, not his/her spelling... Stick to the subject. I bet you are gonna whine again about how i do typos and so on instead of the subject at hand
#4 to #3 - biblioklept
Reply +4
(03/29/2013) [-]
I was just merely stating that you're criticizing language when your language is flawed.    
No need to get butthurt.
I was just merely stating that you're criticizing language when your language is flawed.
No need to get butthurt.
#7 to #4 - damaiuo
Reply 0
(04/03/2013) [-]
Well. I did not say anything about the spelling. just the "you" thing. Nothing else. Why is that so hard to understand?
#8 to #7 - biblioklept
Reply 0
(04/03/2013) [-]
Nothing is hard to understand.
Did I say that I didn't understand? No. I understand your point; it was fine until you got all upset and way too defensive.
And don't say that it 's not sticking to the subject. Your defensive inflection has brought us away from your original point.
Not to mention your original point was condescending and completely incredible due to the spelling errors. When you're critiquing someone else's work, spelling matters.
#9 to #8 - damaiuo
Reply 0
(04/03/2013) [-]
ok