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Going to continue this series. Check out my profile for more morbid content.

I was laying in bed on a stormy night., At the time, I was
so I was seared ,
This night made that fear permanent.
I was almost asleep until I heard a distant giggle from
outside, I got out of bed to look out of my window think-
ing my younger brother was crazy to play in the menu,
but when I pulled back the curtains, I saw a small human
figure running in circles out in the field,
I froze andjust watched until she stopped and looked in
my direction then started running my way, back
in bed and hid under the covers.
A few reorients later, I peeked above the covers' and my
room was still pink and empty. I relaxed a bit, but had the
urge to look out the window again. So I got out
again, pulled back the curtains and saw complete dark-
ness, except a pretty little girl in white on the swings.,
She continued to swing until she noticed me looking at
her. And at that instance she tried to stop swinging, but
she fell on her head and cracked her skull. Like an idiot, I
steed there and stared she cried for help and bled to
I jumped back in bed and hid under the covers and tried
to fall asleep. Hut it was hard to sleep because I kept on
hearing her Scream in my head for hours, until they
stopped, There was rte way that I was going to leek out
the window again. So I finally passed out,
The next morning, I woke up
remembering the terrible
nightmare. Just for laughs, I
thought I leeked out the window.
So when I pulled the curtains
hack, I screamed., There was a
doll with a cracked skull wearing
a white dress lying there on my
windowpane, with a nate that
said "You could have saved nee."
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Submitted: 11/16/2012
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User avatar #10 - stallwallwriter (11/18/2012) [-]
>be 7 years old
>live with mom and bastard step-dad. Can't stand him, decide to run away
>pack my doll and clothes, make it to a nearby field. It starts to rain, don`t care, so happy to be free
>see little kid in a nearby house, maybe he can help me? He leaves the window
>see swingset, start playing with my doll.
> see stepdad coming, oh shit, run leaving my doll on swing
> step dad catches, beats shit out of me. I yell but the boy I saw won't help me.
> limp back the next day, my doll fell off the swing and cracked. I leave it for the kid to find - I want him to know he was a coward.
#2 - kuracha (11/16/2012) [+] (7 replies)
MFW i read the story
MFW i read the story
#5 to #4 - kippa (11/16/2012) [-]
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#9 - leto (11/17/2012) [-]
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User avatar #8 - ilya (11/17/2012) [-]
in my opinion using children as a horror element is such a cliche that it almost kind of ruins the horror in a way :/
User avatar #1 - alooshka (11/16/2012) [-]
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