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Another short pasta whilst I take more time on my special pasta. It's taking a lot time cause I just refuse to work on it. I'm sorry. I'm lazy. What can I say? I've failed you.

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Another short pasta whilst I take more time on my special pasta. It's taking a lot time cause I just refuse to work on it. I'm sorry. I'm lazy. What can I say? I've failed you.

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Images used came from a dramatization of this pasta which can be found at this link: www.youtube.com/watch?v=wuUUozi4M_s

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Submitted: 10/18/2013
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User avatar #2 - noblexfenrir (10/18/2013) [-]
Some tips:
>Get a better mic. Honestly, it takes away from the entire story when you have to speak so close I can hear air hitting the mic when you speak.

>Practice projecting slightly more, your words sometimes slide into one another. (Specifically "s" sounds, this is a common thing pasta readers have to overcome.)

>Quiet down the music, it's a tone setter, not something that should be fighting you for dominance in the audio.

>Your reading is rather...emotionless, basically I can tell you're just reading off of the pasta and nothing more. It should come off as either spontaneous or campfire-ish.

You do have one thing going for you though, your sentence timing is better than alot of other pasta readers. (Creepypastajr and creepsmcpasta specifically.)
User avatar #4 to #2 - pastamaster (10/18/2013) [-]
But you gotta admit this is a good mic for what it is. It's the on-board mic on my laptop. Which usually aren't good mics at all. But this one is pretty decent, though not professional quality.
User avatar #6 to #4 - noblexfenrir (10/18/2013) [-]
Eh, it's still ********* . Yeah it's good for what it is, I mean it's an onboard mic, it's amazing I can hear you at all without background noise taking over.
User avatar #7 to #6 - pastamaster (10/18/2013) [-]
I'm in a completely silent room too. With a makeshift sound dampening setup. But I still have to record a story several times before I get one with limited distortion.
User avatar #3 to #2 - pastamaster (10/18/2013) [-]
>I'm working on it the mic. I get paid on Monday. I'm going to get a Snowball, which is perfect for narrating.

>Projecting is definitely something I have to get better at.

>I think the music level was good. The track I picked for this one didn't really need to be tinkered with much.

>The thing about this particular story...it's a third person story. It doesn't really require as much emotion as, say, a first person story, or lines by characters. If you hear my "Weirdest Security Tape" or "It's Locked" or "Funnymouth (which I haven't uploaded yet)". But again, I am working on improving where I need it.

And thanks. I definitely try to keep my timing decent. However I have to disagree about CreepsMcPasta. He is amazing. He's the one who inspired me to start narrating. Jr. is a different story. He totally lacks emotion and just seems robotic, which is why I barely ever listen to him. The only one who can pull off "robotic" is Litterbot. He's good at what he does.
User avatar #5 to #3 - noblexfenrir (10/18/2013) [-]
Well the music may have relation to your projecting problem, not 100% sure. Although, I will say it was slightly overbearing with the audio you used.

Creeps is good don't get me wrong, I enjoy his work. His inflections are good, and his accent adds to his stories, while I also may make the argument that sometimes it hinders the story depending on the attitude trying to be presented. However, his timing can be as bad as Jr.'s, not as much as he used to but you still see inconsistent sentence stops, which can really damage the listeners "immersion" if you will.
User avatar #8 to #5 - pastamaster (10/18/2013) [-]
At least I edit out my mistakes where necessary. MrCreepyPasta really doesn't care when it comes to that. He may mess up a line 2 or 3 times and leave the **** in there. Even on his more recent, more well done, videos. There's still a mistake or two just left in there.
#1 - solarisofcelestia (10/18/2013) [-]
Too Spoopy for me.
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