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Creepypasta - Close Enough

Another short pasta whilst I take more time on my special pasta. It's taking a lot time cause I just refuse to work on it. I'm sorry. I'm lazy. What can I say? I've failed you.

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Images used came from a dramatization of this pasta which can be found at this link: www.youtube.com/watch?v=wuUUozi4M_s

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Submitted: 10/18/2013
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User avatar #2 - noblexfenrir (10/18/2013) [+] (6 replies)
Some tips:
>Get a better mic. Honestly, it takes away from the entire story when you have to speak so close I can hear air hitting the mic when you speak.

>Practice projecting slightly more, your words sometimes slide into one another. (Specifically "s" sounds, this is a common thing pasta readers have to overcome.)

>Quiet down the music, it's a tone setter, not something that should be fighting you for dominance in the audio.

>Your reading is rather...emotionless, basically I can tell you're just reading off of the pasta and nothing more. It should come off as either spontaneous or campfire-ish.

You do have one thing going for you though, your sentence timing is better than alot of other pasta readers. (Creepypastajr and creepsmcpasta specifically.)
User avatar #3 to #2 - pastamaster (10/18/2013) [-]
>I'm working on it the mic. I get paid on Monday. I'm going to get a Snowball, which is perfect for narrating.

>Projecting is definitely something I have to get better at.

>I think the music level was good. The track I picked for this one didn't really need to be tinkered with much.

>The thing about this particular story...it's a third person story. It doesn't really require as much emotion as, say, a first person story, or lines by characters. If you hear my "Weirdest Security Tape" or "It's Locked" or "Funnymouth (which I haven't uploaded yet)". But again, I am working on improving where I need it.

And thanks. I definitely try to keep my timing decent. However I have to disagree about CreepsMcPasta. He is amazing. He's the one who inspired me to start narrating. Jr. is a different story. He totally lacks emotion and just seems robotic, which is why I barely ever listen to him. The only one who can pull off "robotic" is Litterbot. He's good at what he does.
#1 - solarisofcelestia (10/18/2013) [-]
Too Spoopy for me.
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