CreepyPasta "The NoEnd House. I was browsing 4chan when I saw this post from anon, actually a really good read.. Halfway through I expected: >Door 9 >Open the door >Get on the floor >Everybody walk the dinosaur
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CreepyPasta "The NoEnd House

I was browsing 4chan when I saw this post from anon, actually a really good read

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Submitted: 04/04/2012
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User avatar #11 - LookinHereWhy (04/04/2012) [-]
Halfway through I expected:
>Door 9
>Open the door
>Get on the floor
>Everybody walk the dinosaur
#2 - anonymous (04/04/2012) [-]
Holy shit. The story started dragging on after awhile, but that ending was exactly how a story should end.
User avatar #15 - finnini (04/04/2012) [+] (2 replies)
That house is a cuntish liar.
#10 - thundagawd (04/04/2012) [-]
God damn, I've read this one before, but the final sentence still sends chills down my spine T_T
#28 - zubei (04/05/2012) [-]
P.S. the tags ended the whole suspense feeling I had.
P.S. the tags ended the whole suspense feeling I had.
#4 - LeviV (04/04/2012) [-]
I'm so impressed with this story, my god.
#3 - anonymous (04/04/2012) [-]
david williams is the name of my speech teacher....
#19 - judson (04/04/2012) [-]
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#17 - shaymus (04/04/2012) [-]
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User avatar #6 - cloudstrifeownsall (04/04/2012) [-]
I dont know where it originated but I have seen it on here before... Not complaining.. as long as its not way overposted i dont mind because not everybody gets to see it the first time.
#35 - anonymous (04/08/2012) [+] (2 replies)
As i reached for the doorknob i suddenly came to my senses and realized what i was about to do. I pulled my hand back but then the humming returned. This time I could hear that it was clearly behind me. For a moment my mind went blank, but the humming grew louder and came closer. I couldn't turn around. Without second thought I slammed open the door but the humming was coming closer than ever before. I ran into the room and left the door open behind me. The humming had torn my mind apart once again but a few meters into the room it stopped.

I slowed down to look back, I had to. "Did it stop because I entered the room?" "was it still after me?" I had to know.

When i turned around i realized that this room held a resemblance to room 4. There was no source of light and as in every other room the door had been closed but the strange thing was that the entire room was pitch black, except for the area around door 10. It was lit, I could clearly see the door. I felt no other presence but I could still feel my shoes against the wooden floor. I could feel the air as I swung my arm. It was quite cozy and warm in the room. I felt a sense of releif sweep over my body mixing with the worries and doubts. I felt beyond just sleepy, my eyes stung as they were dried out. My muscles were aching and it felt as if my bones were on the verge of crumbling. I cast one last look around the dark room before I, in my deprivation, decided that now was as good a time as any to sleep.

As i slowly laid down on the firm wooden floor, with my eyes firmly closed, I began noticing a strange irregularity. All i could tell was that the planks i was laying on felt somewhat uneven. I tried to force my eyes open but with all the strength the best I could do was to open my right eye. My vision was blurry. I peeked at the planks by the door, they seemed perfect. Slowly I managed to lift my crushed body from the floor and stand but as i stood up i heard something familiar...


#39 to #35 - anonymous (04/13/2012) [-]
wasnt meant to be continued. dont mess with perfection.
User avatar #24 - zubei (04/05/2012) [+] (3 replies)
Uh, not the greatest literature-analyzing person here. Would a bro care to explain what the ending symbolized?

On a footnote, an amazing read, had me hooked in until the end.
User avatar #37 to #24 - TehGirman (04/10/2012) [-]
Didn't symbolize anything. No End house=House with no end. They assumed it had one because "Reach the 9th room and you get $500".
#5 - blacknmild (04/04/2012) [-]
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User avatar #40 - DiabloStrawhat (05/01/2012) [-]
Definitely one of the best creepypastas i've ever read. Superb from beginning to bone-chilling end.
#38 - anonymous (04/13/2012) [-]
This was so good... i loved it.
#31 - technomafia (04/05/2012) [+] (2 replies)
I wish there was another creepy pasta site i've read all creepy pasta and creepy pasta index
User avatar #25 - cleverguy (04/05/2012) [-]
these are so well written, i don't even mind the typos
User avatar #18 - markeywo (04/04/2012) [-]
Wow, fantastic read, I wouldn't have been surprised if this had been in a collection of short stories like a Stephen King collection, great.
#8 - nelsylife (04/04/2012) [-]
Shit. My windows are open, and I just read the line "...it would be too much for anyone" and I hear the scraping of shoes outside.
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