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Submitted: 04/01/2013
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User avatar #8 - Kairyuka ONLINE (04/01/2013) [-]
You know, as I feel more like Rin than anyone else, I'm not looking for my Rin or Emi, I'm looking for my Hisao. Someone who'll love me for exactly who I am, no matter how stupid and undeserving I might seem of that.
User avatar #7 - puccypirateisback **User deleted account** (04/01/2013) [-]
I was wondering if you meant to write in this free-verse like way or you wanted to structure it. By the way some lines rhyme and the comments, I'm guessing you wanted it to be structured like a poem. Very well done, I was kinda hoping for a more free-verse work but this is good.
User avatar #9 to #7 - saturninepariah (04/01/2013) [-]
It does follow a structure, however when I applied it to the post on the sight it came out in this format, even when I tried to space out the lines. The original has stanzas like any other poem.
User avatar #4 - saturninepariah (04/01/2013) [-]
Thanks! I've been a huge fan of this channel and I’ve felt like sharing some of these poems for a while now. Rin and Hanako's routes gave were the most rewarding when I played them. Both really hit me with how identical their personalities were in comparison to mine. I’ll admit that I cried for days when I finished their good endings. :')

User avatar #6 to #4 - oborawatabinost (04/01/2013) [-]
Very well done, sir.
#3 - DKXX (04/01/2013) [-]
That was amazing. Well done!
User avatar #2 - namdelliks (04/01/2013) [-]
Is this a poem? It isn't very neat :3
I suggest pressing Enter whenever you finish a line to start a new line and clean up the poem as a whole. It would look nicer :)
User avatar #5 to #2 - saturninepariah (04/01/2013) [-]
Yeah, i tried doing that but no matter what i did it still came out in this format. Oh well.
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