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#182 - dirigiblequixote (11/24/2012) [-]
Joy rapture, another one of these wastes of space.   
   
Okay, let's go over why these are horrible:   
   
Insipid art style that thinks it's cute despite drawing everyone missing numerous extremities and many of the details that make up an actual human being.  Don't 						********					 me about the it being chibi or whatever the 						****					 you want to call it: there are ways to make chibi art look good, and this isn't one of them.   
   
The mouths are so bad they deserve their own point.  A mouth does not take up half of somebody's 						*******					 face, especially when you only condescend to let it exist half of the time.  Additionally, when being complemented, a person does not make a D: face, okay?  Like, holy 						****					 how do you even mix up the expressions for what amounts to a tragedy and comedy mask.  That's literally the mistake someone would make if they had no idea how the human face looked.   
   
The jokes (which I'm only using as a technical term; to call these jokes is an insult to everything good in the world) are non-existent.  They're the kinds of things you would see on a Facebook wall or a Tumblr post.   
   
The layout in this one was especially horrific.  I cannot suss out how you managed to clutter up a comic with five panels and nine speech bubbles, but you found a way.  The characters barely even say anything, and every panel is a 						*******					 wall of text.  Jesus Christ, make the speech bubbles smaller so that we can actually process what in the 						****					 is going on.  You should not have upwards of 45% of most panels being speech bubbles.   
   
Again, the art.  I think (operative word being "think") that for the first four panels, the black-haired . . . person was imagining . . . her(?)self as being male.  The person whom we've never seen before, don't know, and who looks really 						*******					 feminine is supposed to be male?  I shouldn't have to explain why this is stupid (assuming that I've even hit the right vein of interpretation, because there is zero clarity in the comic).   
   
Also, "your's"?  						*******					 seriously?
Joy rapture, another one of these wastes of space.

Okay, let's go over why these are horrible:

Insipid art style that thinks it's cute despite drawing everyone missing numerous extremities and many of the details that make up an actual human being. Don't ******** me about the it being chibi or whatever the **** you want to call it: there are ways to make chibi art look good, and this isn't one of them.

The mouths are so bad they deserve their own point. A mouth does not take up half of somebody's ******* face, especially when you only condescend to let it exist half of the time. Additionally, when being complemented, a person does not make a D: face, okay? Like, holy **** how do you even mix up the expressions for what amounts to a tragedy and comedy mask. That's literally the mistake someone would make if they had no idea how the human face looked.

The jokes (which I'm only using as a technical term; to call these jokes is an insult to everything good in the world) are non-existent. They're the kinds of things you would see on a Facebook wall or a Tumblr post.

The layout in this one was especially horrific. I cannot suss out how you managed to clutter up a comic with five panels and nine speech bubbles, but you found a way. The characters barely even say anything, and every panel is a ******* wall of text. Jesus Christ, make the speech bubbles smaller so that we can actually process what in the **** is going on. You should not have upwards of 45% of most panels being speech bubbles.

Again, the art. I think (operative word being "think") that for the first four panels, the black-haired . . . person was imagining . . . her(?)self as being male. The person whom we've never seen before, don't know, and who looks really ******* feminine is supposed to be male? I shouldn't have to explain why this is stupid (assuming that I've even hit the right vein of interpretation, because there is zero clarity in the comic).

Also, "your's"? ******* seriously?
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#292 to #182 - scorcho (11/24/2012) [-]
Just skip it, dude. You're coming across as a massive prick right now. Like some kind of little guy, who is stomping his feet and shouting, because he didn't like the spaghetti his mommy made.
#284 to #182 - huntergriff ONLINE (11/24/2012) [-]
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#282 to #182 - goonmcnasty (11/24/2012) [-]
A lot of people seem to agree with you, actually.   
   
Hell, I do. I will fight the red thumbs.
A lot of people seem to agree with you, actually.

Hell, I do. I will fight the red thumbs.
#250 to #182 - Womens Study Major (11/24/2012) [-]
that's one hilarious gif.
#230 to #182 - Womens Study Major (11/24/2012) [-]
I agree.
User avatar #231 to #230 - naeoro (11/24/2012) [-]
Me too.
#227 to #182 - Womens Study Major (11/24/2012) [-]
It's a comin on the internet, overspeculatin it is just a waste of time.
User avatar #226 to #182 - puggles (11/24/2012) [-]
or you could just pretend that they're all ponies. would that be better?
#216 to #182 - Womens Study Major (11/24/2012) [-]
Wait I just reread the comic after reading this, and he makes a good point. This comic wasn't funny, and the only thing it had going for it was the art, which wasn't so great as well.
#223 to #216 - notstill (11/24/2012) [-]
If your opinion on things like this is so easily swayed by some butthole in the comment section you don't deserve a right to one.
User avatar #214 to #182 - damax (11/24/2012) [-]
There is actually 10 speech bubbles. That makes your rant invalid.
#211 to #182 - zhooker (11/24/2012) [-]
You typed way too many words.
You typed way too many words.
#204 to #182 - daghost (11/24/2012) [-]
Let's see you draw a better comic.
Let's see you draw a better comic.
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#197 to #182 - xbenas (11/24/2012) [-]
Man, I thought nobody would stand up against these "funny" comics.
User avatar #190 to #182 - tardaasa (11/24/2012) [-]
Ehehehe. Your anger amuses me.
#212 to #190 - notstill (11/24/2012) [-]
He was a dick but I agree with some of his points.

Now don't get me wrong, you are a talented artist but your talent stops there. I hate to say it but this is the complete opposite of funny, you should focus on other things besides attempting to draw comics.

Probably going to get red thumbs for this but whatever, my opinion of this stuff is it sucks and that's what it is; an opinion.



at least you listened to people and stopped making the stupid crocodile teeth
#220 to #212 - Womens Study Major (11/24/2012) [-]
Your opinion does not give you the right to tell someone to stop doing something they enjoy. If it isn't hurting anyone then leave it be. You have the option to skip it. You don't have to be a prick and tell someone they should stop doing something just because you, one person, doesn't think it is funny. Hundreds of other people do think it is funny and would probably like Tardaasa to continue making comics. Your opinion is not superior to anyone else's. You have no right to tell someone to stop doing something that you could easily just skip. You can say you do not like the comic for various reasons but telling someone to stop entirely just because you, one tiny person in the world, don't like them is a dick move on your part.
User avatar #222 to #220 - notstill (11/24/2012) [-]
"should"
In any point in my comment did I say "EY YO ***** U BEETA STOP MAKIN DEM 'MICS CUZ IMMA FUK U UP"

I suggested that she does but I didn't tell her to. You're right about me being one tiny person in the world, she probably wont acknowledge my comment and wont stop making comics but who cares.

She'll probably be forgotten eventually
#192 to #190 - dirigiblequixote (11/24/2012) [-]
At least that makes one of us.
#267 to #192 - Womens Study Major (11/24/2012) [-]
BONER ALERT! (LOL BETA FAG, LICK MY PRETZEL LOLOLOLOL LOW SELF ESTEEEM HUEHUEHUHUEHEUEHEUEHUEHEUE!
#187 to #182 - ahrislover (11/24/2012) [-]
I don't think the author made this with your personal viewing pleasure in mind. You kinda killed the point of the joke. So...   
   
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I don't think the author made this with your personal viewing pleasure in mind. You kinda killed the point of the joke. So...

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#191 to #187 - dirigiblequixote (11/24/2012) [-]
Regardless of how much I personally (don't) enjoy it, Tardassa's expectorations are riddled with objective flaws.
Regardless of how much I personally (don't) enjoy it, Tardassa's expectorations are riddled with objective flaws.
#199 to #191 - ccccmoney (11/24/2012) [-]
Because comics need to hold the same standards as real life to be amusing.

Oh wait, that's the opposite of what a comic is.
#186 to #182 - Das (11/24/2012) [-]
Thanks for the review, Gene.
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