Joy rapture, another one of these wastes of space.

Okay, let's go over why these are horrible:

Insipid art style that thinks it's cute despite drawing everyone missing numerous extremities and many of the details that make up an actual human being. Don't ******** me about the it being chibi or whatever the **** you want to call it: there are ways to make chibi art look good, and this isn't one of them.

The mouths are so bad they deserve their own point. A mouth does not take up half of somebody's ******* face, especially when you only condescend to let it exist half of the time. Additionally, when being complemented, a person does not make a D: face, okay? Like, holy **** how do you even mix up the expressions for what amounts to a tragedy and comedy mask. That's literally the mistake someone would make if they had no idea how the human face looked.

The jokes (which I'm only using as a technical term; to call these jokes is an insult to everything good in the world) are non-existent. They're the kinds of things you would see on a Facebook wall or a Tumblr post.

The layout in this one was especially horrific. I cannot suss out how you managed to clutter up a comic with five panels and nine speech bubbles, but you found a way. The characters barely even say anything, and every panel is a ******* wall of text. Jesus Christ, make the speech bubbles smaller so that we can actually process what in the **** is going on. You should not have upwards of 45% of most panels being speech bubbles.

Again, the art. I think (operative word being "think") that for the first four panels, the black-haired . . . person was imagining . . . her(?)self as being male. The person whom we've never seen before, don't know, and who looks really ******* feminine is supposed to be male? I shouldn't have to explain why this is stupid (assuming that I've even hit the right vein of interpretation, because there is zero clarity in the comic).

Also, "your's"? ******* seriously?