The Green Lantern Movie - Part 3
Green lantern as I hope it will be:
Part 3, and the final part I've written, I'll continue if anyone wants it, and I'll do a Batman v Superman script if anyone asks.
Part 1: /The+green+lantern+movie+part+1/text/5755013
Part 2: /channel/fj-writer-guild/The+green+lantern+movie+part+2/ulcfLhy/
Part 3 - The Green Lantern
Hal flies through empty space, alone but surrounded by green light. We see him approach an alien planet (red, dusty, looks a bit like mars).
He streaks down faster than should be possible, unimpeded by entry into the atmosphere he moves at a constant pace. As he reaches the surface of the planet we see a giant squat, brutal looking, humanoid creature destroying an alien settlement.
Thirty times larger than the buildings beneath it the monster smashes the buildings and crushes the aliens that live there as they run in panic.
Hal swoops in, training green light and hovers in front of the creatures face, he addresses it in an alien language, subtitles read:
Hal: Stop, leave this place, by my authority I command you.
The creature opens it's huge mouth to roar at Hal and swings it's hand up to grab him.
Hal tenses and reaches out as a huge green apparition of equal proportions to the creature appears around him mimicking Hal's stance and catching the creatures arm in mid air as it approaches the green monsters newly formed head.
Cut between shots of Hal struggling physically against an invisible opponent while bathed in green light as his light Golem carries out his actions against the Monster.
The fight is quick as when Hal sees an Alien crushed by the monsters foot he grabs the Monster in both hands and lifts it overhead, throwing it away into the empty desert.
Hal and the Golem look down at the destruction in sadness as the Golem shrinks in size and grows paler (less substantial). The Golem flickers out of existence and we hear a cheer go up from the aliens, Hal Grins and stands in the air confidently, his glow becoming stronger before he raises a fist and flies off.
Cut to the unknown Yellow-clad figure standing intimidatingly in front of another Alien Green Lantern (in a corridor?).
The Lantern looks scared as he swings his ring around, whips of green light appear and strike the Yellow Figure ineffectually.
Yellow-clad laughs callously as he raises his own ring, holding his hand palm open with his arm crossing his chest, a yellow light glows around him and extends out to cover the Green Lantern who cries out in pain and fear, he collapses to the floor and writhes in invisible agony.
The Yellow figure walks forward to loom above the Lantern and speaks (Deep but nasal with some gravel to it):
Yellow figure: You will tell me where they have hidden themselves, they can't get away.
The lantern screams and his hand shoot up, open and grasping, pleading at first, but quickly closing into a fist.
A Jet of green light shoot from the ring towards the figure, cutting through the yellow glow and the figure bats it away with the back of his ring hand.
He glares sternly at the Lantern and holds his hand towards him palm out, an orb of yellow surrounds the Lanterns outstretched fist and he gasps.
Yellow-clad tenses his fingers into a claw motion and the Lanterns hand is crushed, blood splatters the inside of the yellow orb before falling to the ground as the orb vanishes.
The Lantern stares at his stump in shock as the ring hovers in the air for a moment, vibrating in a silent battle of wills, the yellow light grows in strength around the figure as the lantern curls up on the floor grasping his stump.
With a loud crack the ring splits in half and the two pieces fly into The figures hand, he cries out in angry dismay and clenches his fist tight, crushing the ring in his hand and letting the pieces fall to the floor.
He turns back to the Lantern as their clothes turn back to 'normal' alien garb, very ragged and dirty, the alien ages rapidly and grows visibly weaker. The yellow figure talks again.
Yellow figure: I can save your life, I can get you a new hand. Tell me where they are.
The Lantern looks up at the figure, angry and disgusted.
Yellow figure: I have taken your power, I have taken everything from you, and you will tell me where to find them.
The Lantern stares willfully at the Yellow figure as he stares back, moments pass as they hold each other's gaze. The Yellow figure is the first to look away.
Yellow figure: I don't need you to find them, I'll hunt down every Green lantern in the universe if I have to. I'll kill them all.
He looks back at the Lantern who is still glaring at him, unflinching and resolute.
Yellow figure: Except for you... Tell them, when they find you.
Tell them Sinestro is coming.
Scene ends and the Lantern looks fearfully at Sinestro as he floats slowly backwards into the sky (out a window/door?).
Hello, long time FJ'er, first time OC'er. How is everybody?
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