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narratorguy ONLINE (01/06/2016) [-] The Red Dominion,
Crucky McBadbet the Imp
STR:2+8
AGL:6+1
CON:2
LUK:17
INT:3
WIS:2
CHA:3
Charge, Vanguard,Horsemen, Agility, Bluff
Polearm-$7,Padded Gambeson-$5,Helmet-$7,Gauntlets-$5,Shield-$5, Donkey-$20, One Enchanted Mango-$1, Total of 50.
Mikhail as the Death Knight, Lady Snaketress as the Cryotomancer, Deidre as the Paladin,+Reedwind as the Smooth Talker
Defector+Exemplar
Visions and Demonic Squire
Siege of Bastions Hold, Alatun, and Free the King.
The Alien
So yeah, last time you wanted use to critize your cyoa but I thought it was fine this one is probably the worst of the two. The Neutral Quests all seem thankless and have little rewards in comparison to the Faction Quests. I'd like to an actual form of Necromancy Disciple for our Selves. Definitely more Mage Companions, and at least two Neutral pure Healers or One per Faction. Wanted is pretty useless when Most Rogues would opt for the Blood Pirates or the Porgons. I'd say Half-breeds should be simplified, Add both of the races up and divide it by 2, then every two half point can be added anywhere, any extra half points are rounded down and go no where.
Crucky McBadbet the Imp
STR:2+8
AGL:6+1
CON:2
LUK:17
INT:3
WIS:2
CHA:3
Charge, Vanguard,Horsemen, Agility, Bluff
Polearm-$7,Padded Gambeson-$5,Helmet-$7,Gauntlets-$5,Shield-$5, Donkey-$20, One Enchanted Mango-$1, Total of 50.
Mikhail as the Death Knight, Lady Snaketress as the Cryotomancer, Deidre as the Paladin,+Reedwind as the Smooth Talker
Defector+Exemplar
Visions and Demonic Squire
Siege of Bastions Hold, Alatun, and Free the King.
The Alien
So yeah, last time you wanted use to critize your cyoa but I thought it was fine this one is probably the worst of the two. The Neutral Quests all seem thankless and have little rewards in comparison to the Faction Quests. I'd like to an actual form of Necromancy Disciple for our Selves. Definitely more Mage Companions, and at least two Neutral pure Healers or One per Faction. Wanted is pretty useless when Most Rogues would opt for the Blood Pirates or the Porgons. I'd say Half-breeds should be simplified, Add both of the races up and divide it by 2, then every two half point can be added anywhere, any extra half points are rounded down and go no where.
