Great War of Ordion CYOA v.2.0
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#2
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fappafappafap [OP](01/05/2016) [+] (4 replies)
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Minor mistake, the "Ranger" Discipline should be called the "Archer" Discipline, I had forgotten to edit it in and I do not know how to change the first picture.
#9
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narratorguy (01/06/2016) [-] The Red Dominion,
Crucky McBadbet the Imp
STR:2+8
AGL:6+1
CON:2
LUK:17
INT:3
WIS:2
CHA:3
Charge, Vanguard,Horsemen, Agility, Bluff
Polearm-$7,Padded Gambeson-$5,Helmet-$7,Gauntlets-$5,Shield-$5, Donkey-$20, One Enchanted Mango-$1, Total of 50.
Mikhail as the Death Knight, Lady Snaketress as the Cryotomancer, Deidre as the Paladin,+Reedwind as the Smooth Talker
Defector+Exemplar
Visions and Demonic Squire
Siege of Bastions Hold, Alatun, and Free the King.
The Alien
So yeah, last time you wanted use to critize your cyoa but I thought it was fine this one is probably the worst of the two. The Neutral Quests all seem thankless and have little rewards in comparison to the Faction Quests. I'd like to an actual form of Necromancy Disciple for our Selves. Definitely more Mage Companions, and at least two Neutral pure Healers or One per Faction. Wanted is pretty useless when Most Rogues would opt for the Blood Pirates or the Porgons. I'd say Half-breeds should be simplified, Add both of the races up and divide it by 2, then every two half point can be added anywhere, any extra half points are rounded down and go no where.
Crucky McBadbet the Imp
STR:2+8
AGL:6+1
CON:2
LUK:17
INT:3
WIS:2
CHA:3
Charge, Vanguard,Horsemen, Agility, Bluff
Polearm-$7,Padded Gambeson-$5,Helmet-$7,Gauntlets-$5,Shield-$5, Donkey-$20, One Enchanted Mango-$1, Total of 50.
Mikhail as the Death Knight, Lady Snaketress as the Cryotomancer, Deidre as the Paladin,+Reedwind as the Smooth Talker
Defector+Exemplar
Visions and Demonic Squire
Siege of Bastions Hold, Alatun, and Free the King.
The Alien
So yeah, last time you wanted use to critize your cyoa but I thought it was fine this one is probably the worst of the two. The Neutral Quests all seem thankless and have little rewards in comparison to the Faction Quests. I'd like to an actual form of Necromancy Disciple for our Selves. Definitely more Mage Companions, and at least two Neutral pure Healers or One per Faction. Wanted is pretty useless when Most Rogues would opt for the Blood Pirates or the Porgons. I'd say Half-breeds should be simplified, Add both of the races up and divide it by 2, then every two half point can be added anywhere, any extra half points are rounded down and go no where.
#1
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omicronperseieight (01/05/2016) [-] I was going to ask for a small changelog because I didn't think that I would see any major changes at first glance
Boy was I wrong
Boy was I wrong
#10
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migaelz (01/06/2016) [-] I tried to make General ouki from the manga/anime "Kingdom" he fits quite well with this CYOA. although he doesnt have magic.
Name : Ou Ki (Monstrous Raven of Ordion)
Alliance of ravenhall
Human
-All abilities
STR:6/15 AGI:6/15 CON:6/15 LUK:11/20 WIS:6/15 CHA:6/15
(huge stat boosts due to hero of legend and examplar
Skills:
Two handed skill
-Vanguard
-Attrition
miscellaneous skills
-Block/Parry
-Horseman
-Heavy armour
Items:
Weapons:
-Polearm
-Everlasting Whetstone
armour:
Plate
Misc:
-Nice Boots
-Warhorse
Companions
- Lyarra Rogers
- Lord Albrecht of House Reuter
- Deirdre the Righteous
Boon:
-Exemplar
Drawback:
-The Hero of Legend
Quests:
- Siege of RavenHall
- DuskTown
- The nightmare of WENN
Final Battle
- All enemies
Name : Ou Ki (Monstrous Raven of Ordion)
Alliance of ravenhall
Human
-All abilities
STR:6/15 AGI:6/15 CON:6/15 LUK:11/20 WIS:6/15 CHA:6/15
(huge stat boosts due to hero of legend and examplar
Skills:
Two handed skill
-Vanguard
-Attrition
miscellaneous skills
-Block/Parry
-Horseman
-Heavy armour
Items:
Weapons:
-Polearm
-Everlasting Whetstone
armour:
Plate
Misc:
-Nice Boots
-Warhorse
Companions
- Lyarra Rogers
- Lord Albrecht of House Reuter
- Deirdre the Righteous
Boon:
-Exemplar
Drawback:
-The Hero of Legend
Quests:
- Siege of RavenHall
- DuskTown
- The nightmare of WENN
Final Battle
- All enemies
#11 to #10
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migaelz (01/06/2016) [-] there were a few things that could have been nice:
- Strategic mind, the ability to lead armies.
in some quests you will Siege or protect things. so being able to lead armies would suite quite nicely.
- Tactician companions
I feel like you have politicians and warriors as companions which are great. but I still miss the companion that has great insight.
overall, this was pretty amazing ^^
- Strategic mind, the ability to lead armies.
in some quests you will Siege or protect things. so being able to lead armies would suite quite nicely.
- Tactician companions
I feel like you have politicians and warriors as companions which are great. but I still miss the companion that has great insight.
overall, this was pretty amazing ^^
#12 to #10
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migaelz (01/06/2016) [-] I forgot the 10 extra stat points you get after picking a race
STR:11/20 AGI:6/15 CON:11/20 LUK:11/20 WIS:6/15 CHA:6/15
I wish I knew "how much" luck helps with all the rolls. even if it's not a lot I might have pumped that otherwise :/
also, cant wait till the hero of legend statboosts reach the max 10 instead of the 1 that it is now XD
STR:11/20 AGI:6/15 CON:11/20 LUK:11/20 WIS:6/15 CHA:6/15
I wish I knew "how much" luck helps with all the rolls. even if it's not a lot I might have pumped that otherwise :/
also, cant wait till the hero of legend statboosts reach the max 10 instead of the 1 that it is now XD
#5
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ompalomper (01/05/2016) [-] Bit of an awkward sentence in the reward for "siege of ravenhall"
"Or a chance to court his one of his many daughters"
I guess you want to say either "his one daughter" or "one of his many daughters"
"Or a chance to court his one of his many daughters"
I guess you want to say either "his one daughter" or "one of his many daughters"
