Original Character
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#1
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leonhardt (09/25/2015) [-] >While aplying colors I figure this was a total disaster
>A million billion times better than 90% of people will ever do
>A million billion times better than 90% of people will ever do
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nfwar [OP](09/25/2015) [-] **nfwar used "*roll picture*"**
**nfwar rolled image**I cans disagree with you. After this picture was coming along just fine, I realised that her face is.. meh. Some of my friends told me "Eyes are too round and big". I was about to change her face compleatly so somehting else that I already made, but one of my friends just stop me. Blame him tbh c:
**nfwar rolled image**I cans disagree with you. After this picture was coming along just fine, I realised that her face is.. meh. Some of my friends told me "Eyes are too round and big". I was about to change her face compleatly so somehting else that I already made, but one of my friends just stop me. Blame him tbh c:
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rebornpotato (09/26/2015) [-] Love the sketch and the idea of the character, only complain would be it seems the head is a bit longish.
Also as someone who is learning 3d modeling i'd love to try to make this character, with your permission of course, once i get better at organic modeling.
Also as someone who is learning 3d modeling i'd love to try to make this character, with your permission of course, once i get better at organic modeling.
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rebornpotato (09/26/2015) [-] **rebornpotato used "*roll picture*"**
**rebornpotato rolled image** Here is Shia for you, and that's awesome thanks! i'll have to definitely work on my abilities for that, and i will of course message you with results when i can do it.
**rebornpotato rolled image** Here is Shia for you, and that's awesome thanks! i'll have to definitely work on my abilities for that, and i will of course message you with results when i can do it.
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rollmeanddie (09/25/2015) [-] I'm broke as **** atm, but when it evens out I'd be willing to give it a shot. Your style looks like it'd be really good for World of Warcraft or Warhammer 40k characters, or maybe Pathfinder. You've got that 'high detail, but just cartoonish enough to avoid the uncanny valley' look going on.
#62
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shadowbndg (09/26/2015) [-]
Honestly I was gonna make a smart combination of Halfling and Tiefling...but the two are already.
#40
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ScottP (09/26/2015) [-] I drew this yesterday. I was messing around with the colors to try and figure out how to do proper shadows and highlights so a lot of the colors are really off.
It's an original character I've been working on for several months. He even appears in a short film I directed in, starring me as this character. Shameless self promotion there lol
It's an original character I've been working on for several months. He even appears in a short film I directed in, starring me as this character. Shameless self promotion there lol
#13
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daxtercelebi (09/25/2015) [-] Champ, how would you like to draw for money? I will have to ask how much you charge for what but....please go easy on my wallet.
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daxtercelebi (09/25/2015) [-] Dont worry, even if its your first commission i doubt either of us will be disappointed, what can you add to the drawings and what are your limits to draw?
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daxtercelebi (09/25/2015) [-] Humanoid is what i am after, would you mind to take this conversation to a bit more private side? No point in spamming it up
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titsfortots (09/25/2015) [-] That sounded kinda sexual to me. I hope it was. If so, please send me the juicy sexting you two shared. xoxo
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titsfortots (09/25/2015) [-] I was hoping it would help me blow something else, but mind works too.
#76
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akihiro (09/26/2015) [-] Damn nice drawning. wish i could draw this well. I want to draw out my D&D characters >.>
#72
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captainprincess (09/26/2015) [-] weird non-eyebrow brows always irritate me
Not sure why but they're like a beacon of raw ugliness to me
Not sure why but they're like a beacon of raw ugliness to me
#60
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putinlover (09/26/2015) [-] im dumshet at drawing, but if this is a disaster, what the **** am i supposed to say?
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sptnfouroneseven (09/26/2015) [-] That's uh... Halfling and tree people right? I'm not big into Guild Wars, only Know Char.
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sptnfouroneseven (09/26/2015) [-] Ah alright, neat. As I said reminds me of a Halfling/Teifling mix.
#51
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sirdood (09/26/2015) [-] well, here's my two cents
Main problem here is body proportions, like a lot of people here are already saying.
Limbs in general are way too thick - it makes the character look really short. The head is really ******* huge. It's like 3 times the size it should be (on a human at least). Arms go down way too far. The fingertips shouldn't be so close to the knees, or else it gives the feeling that the character is, once again, really short. Female chest is fine, although the breasts could be a bit higher up, especially since it looks to be a tight-fitting shirt. Legs should be longer on females (although if you make them less thick like I said above, then this can be mostly ignored). The face also looks really strange, mostly because the eyes are too big and the mouth is too small.
The stuff I've said above is based on my own understanding of human anatomy though, so take it as you will. Elves (your tag) should give off a feeling of being taller than regular humans though. Unless you mean the Lucky Charms kind of elves. Otherwise, really good stuff.
Main problem here is body proportions, like a lot of people here are already saying.
Limbs in general are way too thick - it makes the character look really short. The head is really ******* huge. It's like 3 times the size it should be (on a human at least). Arms go down way too far. The fingertips shouldn't be so close to the knees, or else it gives the feeling that the character is, once again, really short. Female chest is fine, although the breasts could be a bit higher up, especially since it looks to be a tight-fitting shirt. Legs should be longer on females (although if you make them less thick like I said above, then this can be mostly ignored). The face also looks really strange, mostly because the eyes are too big and the mouth is too small.
The stuff I've said above is based on my own understanding of human anatomy though, so take it as you will. Elves (your tag) should give off a feeling of being taller than regular humans though. Unless you mean the Lucky Charms kind of elves. Otherwise, really good stuff.
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sirdood (09/26/2015) [-] Looks a bit too serious to be cartoony to me. Too much greyscale plus it's really well detailed really nice job on that by the way , which puts it straight into uncanny valley because of the proportions.
My suggestion for practicing a cartoony style is to draw it as well as possible without erasing anything. That doesn't necessarily mean quick, though. Also, avoid accentuating the neck so much with such a large head - it makes her look like a giraffe.
sorry i feel like im being super critical, but i really like what you got
My suggestion for practicing a cartoony style is to draw it as well as possible without erasing anything. That doesn't necessarily mean quick, though. Also, avoid accentuating the neck so much with such a large head - it makes her look like a giraffe.
sorry i feel like im being super critical, but i really like what you got
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anon (09/26/2015) [-]
I'm pretty sure all of that stuff about the proportions is intentional. She's not supposed to be human-sized. Much smaller than that. Also, as far as I'm aware this is also supposed to be a "cartoony" style drawing. I know the artist and he also does much more realistic art.
