Looks good, but I think you should look at the anatomy in real humans, because especially the boobs looks fake. I think you should also practice the eyes a lot, because even if you think about the angle of your drawing, the eyes look like they are from two different people
I didn't mean you should draw like Michelangelo but cartoons and manga are often based on real humans
That being said it's good that you are working on improving even if you have a diffecult time with the eyes
which is why i'm now trying to draw by hand so I don't use shortcuts
because after a year of drawing with just photoshop i have seen my artwork decay in quality so now i will be only using photoshop to bring out lines and color/shade
so this drawing is more of a sketch for me to build on in photoshop
hopefully this way of drawing will bring the quality back in my art
**evilkingganon used "*roll picture*"** **evilkingganon rolled image** Just remember your art is what you want it to be. Dont be swayed by by others opinions too much. Just because someone doesnt like it doesn't make it wrong. If youre confident in your work then others will accept it
I see some things that could be improved with practice. Not that that's bad, everything can be improved with practice! You've got some really good things going on here, so please, hang onto this. Maybe redraw the same character/pose in a month or two, see what's different and what you like.
And seriously, that thing you said you're doing, down in the comments. KEEP DOING IT. The "Let it Flow" thing is very, very beneficial. A lot of artists let that go in favor of realism and technique. Just make sure you don't shirk the tough stuff like imitations and studies.