"Naruto" in a nutshell.. It happens more often than you'd think... today this club loses a member may he rest in peace DATTEBAYO
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> hey anon, wanna give your opinion?
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User avatar #67 to #66 - pull [OP]
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I DON'T WANNA, GIRLS ARE OUT THERE
#115 to #67 - SevenForOhNoe
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then I pulled out my gun!!!!
User avatar #5 - dracory
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today this club loses a member may he rest in peace
User avatar #121 to #5 - mattseven
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Some friend spoiled me this today. I hit him and cried.
User avatar #122 to #121 - dracory
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if you read down the thread starting at the first reply to me and follow you can (maybe) crack the code and see if you agree with that outcome
User avatar #12 to #5 - ljxjlos
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And there will be way more people dying. But well, I don´t really care as long as Shikamaru and Hinata survive...
User avatar #15 to #12 - dracory
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join in below man and i agree i think about 46% will be left when all is said and done
User avatar #19 to #15 - ljxjlos
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Dunno, I don´t think Kishimoto will kill of half of his Characters in one Sweep, right before the End of his Series. But at least my Favorites are save and there are some characters who have been perfectly built up to be Sacrifices. I lost interest in Naruto and Bleach nearly a Year ago, was just reading them alongside with One Piece when it came out, but Naruto starts regaining my interest, i hope it will stay this way.
User avatar #20 to #19 - dracory
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this is why i pointed down if you get the code you might agree with that story arc he would kill them
User avatar #24 to #20 - ljxjlos
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Aaaah, so much code at such a late hour.D
...I don´t know where I should plug in, but I don´t think the " pulling a final pain" thing will happen. If I understand right, what you meant by this, the drama would be taken away. I think it will be done in good, old-fashioned shounen style, only with more corpses left on the side. I would be disappointed if it all ended like the Attack on Konoha- Arc
User avatar #26 to #24 - dracory
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think bigger though big N is 5x stronger atleast so maybe even those already used
User avatar #63 to #5 - shazmothree
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I can't wait to see Naruto go ******* beast mode in the next chapter
User avatar #124 to #63 - dracory
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thats only going to be the tip of the ice read down the thread starting from the first reply
User avatar #36 to #5 - thedeadlypajamas
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No! No, I haven't caught up yet! Don't say it! D:
User avatar #64 to #36 - DekuNut
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Neji
User avatar #107 to #64 - thepyras
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Oh good. I thought for a second it would be Gaara and I was upset.
User avatar #139 to #64 - thedeadlypajamas
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You sir, are a monster.
User avatar #38 to #36 - dracory
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read the rest of the thread i dont spoil i leave code and if you understand the code you get it all
User avatar #41 to #38 - thedeadlypajamas
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Ok, phew. XD
User avatar #43 to #41 - dracory
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see i'm with the faithful
User avatar #6 to #5 - pull [OP]
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Don't say a word more, there are some people who haven't read it or refuse to do anything but wait for the anime. I did nearly cry like a bitch, though.
User avatar #8 to #6 - dracory
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but i never posted a name just saying my farewells
User avatar #9 to #8 - pull [OP]
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True. May he rest in peace.
User avatar #11 to #9 - dracory
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i still think big N is going to pull a final pain for those who understand the clue, well done
User avatar #13 to #11 - pull [OP]
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What, absorb the you-know-what, too? Interesting.
User avatar #14 to #13 - dracory
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i think there is more to it i think big N has something even he doesnt know about tucked away, a finial gift for those that made him who he is. .
p.s. this is code
User avatar #16 to #14 - pull [OP]
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Yeah, you may be right. If he's a direct descendant of the first guy and is his reincarnation (I mean, seriously, LOOK AT HIM WHEN HE TRANSFORMS) he might be the only one who can pull it off.
User avatar #18 to #16 - dracory
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i think he is the true aire i heard tell that the first guy had 3 kids one with eye a one with eye b and one with none (visible atleast)
User avatar #22 to #18 - pull [OP]
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Dunno about three kids, though that would explain Naruto's mom's family, right?
User avatar #23 to #22 - dracory
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yep eye a killed his brother eye b to steal the power but left the last sibling cause he had nothing (except all the family secret seals)
User avatar #25 to #23 - pull [OP]
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Huh, I think you may be onto something.
User avatar #27 to #25 - dracory
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thats the best thing i can think of with the one shot parent eps just before all this telling him some of there secrets. .
User avatar #28 to #27 - pull [OP]
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Hmm... Foreshadowing, much? Remember, at this point, Naruto doesn't know who his ancestor is... Could be something in the future to look forward to.
User avatar #29 to #28 - dracory
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no think about how he connected he rezzed the big 10 and what happened just before that moment
User avatar #30 to #29 - pull [OP]
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Huh, you're right. Go here, they may have already talked about this before, but I'm not sure... http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WMG/Naruto
User avatar #33 to #30 - dracory
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move back up to top to reply
User avatar #31 to #30 - dracory
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i got most the tips there but i think he will change the results of the jutsu this time
User avatar #32 to #31 - pull [OP]
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We'll just have to wait and see, I think.
User avatar #34 to #32 - dracory
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i agree completely but i still think backup has yet to really arrive
User avatar #35 to #34 - pull [OP]
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Who do you think is on the way? Who else has yet to come?
User avatar #37 to #35 - dracory
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go back up and reply to top but i think the one looking for answer cause big N is somehow involved (like always)
User avatar #39 to #8 - pull [OP]
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Hm, maybe... I'm getting kinda excited for the series all over again, if "he" somehow comes back to life...
User avatar #40 to #39 - dracory
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or atleast gives a hand
User avatar #42 to #40 - pull [OP]
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Wait wait wait a second... I just remembered something. "I" used that sword on a full-powered zombie "N" to seal him in it, right? Then... perhaps "N" is still somehow alive, uninfluenced by "K" releasing that jutsu? And the sword still has to exist somewhere... Maybe inside of Sasuke again??
User avatar #44 to #42 - dracory
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close think wht jutsus are used lately "K" and "O" now add that to your last comment
User avatar #45 to #44 - pull [OP]
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... Jesus ****. If "M" can pull that off, and "N" is still alive, and "M" evolved his eyes when he was a zombie, maybe "N" can use that jutsu without dying?
User avatar #46 to #45 - dracory
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yep you see you see
User avatar #47 to #46 - pull [OP]
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Crap. How epic would that be?? Kishimoto has been throwing us curve balls since the beginning of the war, it would be just like him to do that.
User avatar #48 to #47 - dracory
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now you know the conclusion that makes sence FOLLOWING all the things that happened but i dont think thats the final chapter i got more
User avatar #49 to #48 - pull [OP]
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Please. I stopped trying to predict the end three hundred chapters ago.
User avatar #51 to #49 - dracory
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got a guess?
User avatar #50 to #49 - dracory
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just think now which piece is missing from this little finally that could mean the end. . surely they wouldnt leave him out like that now
User avatar #52 to #50 - pull [OP]
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... Huh. I get what you're saying, but my brain can't comprehend the pure awesome it implies.
User avatar #53 to #52 - dracory
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add in the item even snake couldnt use mixed with the formula above
User avatar #54 to #53 - pull [OP]
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Jesus Christ.
User avatar #55 to #54 - dracory
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now i think we have a mixed of increased epicness but to through in a dash of the always hated T this formula must have a price that matches the sum
User avatar #56 to #55 - pull [OP]
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Indeed. I'm writing a fanfiction on You need to login to view this link that's actually going somewhat that way. It's called "Rising Star" if you want to read it, my handle there is "dead witch". People seem to like it.
User avatar #57 to #56 - dracory
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i'm very good at storywork i can ussual predict the outcome of a long lasting series in 20 eps and for naruto i see 4 last ep outcomes 2 with the hated T and 2 with the classic fade away
User avatar #58 to #57 - pull [OP]
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Actually, I believe that Kishimoto has said that the final fight will be between Naruto and Sasuke, straight up.
User avatar #62 to #58 - pull [OP]
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Yup. Sorry, was away from my computer for a few minutes.
User avatar #61 to #58 - dracory
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look at comment #60
User avatar #60 to #58 - dracory
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all and all looking at everything we talked about i think i did a good job leading you through my code
User avatar #59 to #58 - dracory
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i know but i'm talking about the result of that fight we all know that will b the final figh they already said it in the seires
#68 - gaffateip
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Neji ...
#81 to #68 - adventurefag
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#117 to #68 - justafangirl
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im really hoping they pull a gaara/kakashi and bring him back somehow
im really hoping they pull a gaara/kakashi and bring him back somehow
User avatar #87 to #68 - kingofdarkn
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That made me sad when i read that chapter
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User avatar #69 to #68 - goldhiddan
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Neji...
User avatar #112 to #68 - megaton
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i like how when i read his death scene i felt like he was also inadvertently said "look at hinata who was about to get stabbed for u again, maybe you should pay more attention"
#75 to #68 - erethilful
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#80 to #68 - cjasper
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genius...
#114 to #68 - SevenForOhNoe
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dude y would u bring that up about my favorite character
#1 - mankey
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#3 to #2 - mankey
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Spoiler Alert! :P
#4 to #3 - pull [OP]
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Welcome to the internet, let me be your guide.
#7 to #4 - mankey
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Tobi Wallpaper.
#10 to #7 - pull [OP]
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Yes.
#17 to #10 - mankey
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Itachi still my favourite though.
#21 to #17 - pull [OP]
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Easily one of the most complex characters in the series.

Pic unrelated, just massive and awesome.
#72 to #21 - mankey
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Am I the only one who would like to see the Naruto series from the view of either Sasuke or Itachi?

I would say just Sasuke, to keep Itachi and his motives more mysterious, but a few episodes would just be the inside of a barrel. lol
User avatar #73 to #72 - pull [OP]
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Between him fighting Orochimaru, him fighting Deidara, fighting Itachi (twice) and going after the Kage, hasn't roughly one third of the story been devoted to him already?
User avatar #74 to #73 - mankey
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Yeah but I want to see his training with Orochimaru. Instead of all that filler. See his training with his "Sword of Kusanagi" rather than him just turning up with it. Watch his mind and personality twist and change, something along the lines of Light in Death Note. :P
User avatar #77 to #74 - pull [OP]
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Well, yeah, but the corruption of Light from "well-intentioned extremest" into an "omnicidal maniac" is the crux of the story of Death Note. It's the classic "corruption of the innocent" story, while "Naruto" is a "rise of the hero" story.
User avatar #78 to #77 - mankey
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But rise of a hero is such a cliche, everyone does it. The fall of the villain is much more interesting.
User avatar #79 to #78 - pull [OP]
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Oh, we'll see the fall of the villain, all right. Just about when Naruto kicks Sasuke's ass up between his ears so he can literally start talking **** after all the metaphorical **** talking he's been doing.
User avatar #128 to #17 - swiekim
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this picture is ******* awesome... just wish you could see the eyes better
User avatar #120 - redyankees
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I just read the new chapter...

Manly tears were shed
User avatar #140 to #120 - wubz
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I know that feel
User avatar #141 - wubz
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I never knew how great of a character Neji was until it was to late
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#135 to #133 - vexaton
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You cheeky cunt!
You cheeky cunt!
User avatar #136 to #135 - pull [OP]
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I deleted it before it did too much damage, don't worry.
#138 to #136 - anon id: aa95afdb
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Thanks!
****... Haven't logged in yet. (blue screened while typing my comment about why I quit watching Naruto)
-Vexaton
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>Reading new chapter
>See Hinata about to die
>WTF RAGEQUIT MODE ENGAGED
>See a different character die instead
>MFW
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#119 - acefaceovrlrd
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what a drag.
User avatar #82 - theonlyjero
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ITT - Favourite 3 Characters and what 2 characters from 2 different anime series would you want to see fight?

- Tobi - Because he is just ******* awesome, Kiddish and funny at first and then he becomes badass.
- Gaara - His story was sad and since then he has become far more awesome.
- Kakashi - Wise, young and horny. Plus he is actually pretty damn funny/awesome at times.

I would want to watch Roy Mustang from Full Metal Alchemist fighting against Jiriaya.
Now that would be a fight to watch.
User avatar #111 to #82 - thedarkestrogue
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1. Naruto: because I am so much like him its rediculous.
2. Kakashi: c'mon who doesnt ******* love kakashi
3. Itatchi: I did not ******* see that twist coming. He is ******* amazing.
User avatar #130 to #82 - swiekim
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itachi
kakashi
minato

havnt really watched many different ones to say
User avatar #83 to #82 - pull [OP]
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Itachi, he's a very complex character.

Jugo, the gentle, insane giant.

Minato, he's ******* beast.

I would like to see Ichigo in Vizord mode fight Asakura Yoh with the SOE and Amidamaru.
User avatar #137 to #83 - yoh **User deleted account**
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Huh?
User avatar #134 to #83 - blarglestheclown
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I love you your first two are the same as mine <3
User avatar #84 to #83 - theonlyjero
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Oh yeah...I forgot about Minato, he is pretty damn beast.
Shame he doesn't appear much, would've been nice to see him kick some ass.
User avatar #85 to #84 - pull [OP]
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I have a question for you, if I may be so bold. Do you often read fan fiction? Because I'm writing one, and I'd like to get an opinion regarding a fight I'd like to write.
User avatar #86 to #85 - theonlyjero
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I don't usually read fan fiction but I do enjoy theories and the like so yeah, I'd be happy to help friend.
Also, I read a great deal so yeah, I'm sure I could give my insight and opinion buddy.
User avatar #89 to #86 - pull [OP]
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Okay, here goes.

It's a story that's already fairly epic in length, as these things go-- over four hundred thousand words in. The remaining living Jinchuriki in my story, minus Han, the Five-Tailed host, and Yagura, the Three, are about to go into battle with the Rain and Sound villages, plus a few thousand mercenaries, in an all out war. Now, would it be cheating for when Naruto tries to tap into the full power of the Kyuubi (made more complicated, being as the Kyuubi itself is dead, but has returned all of his chakra from inside the shinigami's gut to Naruto's body-- long story) for Minato to take over his son's body, transform it into his original, and just lay waste to both Pain and Tobi?
User avatar #90 to #89 - theonlyjero
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That would be pure awesomeness in a sweet blonde bundle there my friend.
I must say that sounds all kinds of awesome, the only thing is, will Minato possess all of his original abilities? and also will his wife be a part of this? (Because they both sealed themselves inside of Naruto, so if Minato was able to come back then it would make sense that Naruto's mother comes back or at least aids Minato by giving him her jutsu and abilities.)
But yeah, overall that sounds really damn cool.
Will you be posting this online somewhere? I'd very much like to read this fan fiction by the sounds of it.
User avatar #91 to #90 - pull [OP]
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It's on ff.net, called "Rising Star" by me, "dead witch"

Spoiler alert. If you don't want any, tell me to stop... but I've got a REALLY, REALLY awesome idea. I know it's awesome, because when I thought of it, I had to sit down for ten minutes and ponder the moral implications.

I repeat: I HAD A CRISIS OF THE SOUL OVER A FANFICTION.
User avatar #92 to #91 - theonlyjero
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Haha, I must admit, It does sound pretty damned awesome, I do enjoy reading and I enjoy Anime so that two together is really cool.
I'm currently reading Full Metal Alchemist (After having watched both series about 4 times each) and I must admit it is awesome.
I will search out your fan fiction on that site now, should be a nice read.
User avatar #93 to #92 - pull [OP]
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Oh, good. Would you like a spoiler to tide you over? Honestly, I still do need to run it by someone before I write it, and I'm only about four chapters away from the end of the story.
User avatar #94 to #93 - theonlyjero
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Well, I have just saved it to my favourites so that I can come back and read it some time.
I wouldn't mind a spoiler.
So far though, through a quick glance I can tell that I am going to enjoy this when I can start to read it.
User avatar #95 to #94 - pull [OP]
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Thank you. Always good to have a new fan lol.

Well, here's the spoiler... in a nutshell. Due to an extreme set of circumstances, Naruto calls a council of all living jinchuriki at the Land of Iron's fortress, like a Kage Council. While there, they are besieged by the Akatsuki, Rain, Sound, missing nin, and mercenaries. Naruto uses a technique to repel a monumental rain of arrow, spears, and the like, but quickly runs out of chakra. Kyuubi uses the seal on Naruto's belly to make a contract with the Shinigami-- trade his own soul for the other half of his power locked away inside of the Shinigami.

Now, this is what I have yet to write: During the battle, Naruto is fighting as hard as he can, but can't use his full power-- none of them can, due to the huge collateral damage they could cause, and they would get in each other's way. Along the way, Naruto gets into a 1 on 6 fight against Pain, and is getting his ass handed to him on a silver platter. In a rage, Naruto goes into his seal and begins the process of unlocking his full potential, but without the Kyuubi there to regulate the process. Minato appears to stop him, where it is revealed that he and his wife literally sealed their souls inside of him. Naruto realizes that he can't fight Pain on his own, but his soul and his father's are nearly identical. He forces his father to take control of his body, which is when he fights Pain, and destroys him. Cut to later, battle's over, and Naruto falls into a coma when his body is returned.

Now, here's the tricky part-- Kurama trading his soul for his chakra has caused some irregularities with the concept of "death", especially since Nagato used his seventh path to return all those killed in battle to life. Shinigami's grip on the rules of life and death is fluctuating; some people survive wounds that should be mortal. Several months after the battle, Naruto is using his father's notes, the Second Hokage's notes, and Chiyo's notes from Sand regarding her healing jutsu that she used on Sakura and Gaara that were supposed to make living puppets, all in the attempt to make a true, no strings attached, resurrection jutsu. Along the way, he learns how to make a blood and guts copy of himself, only without the power of the beast inside of him.

He ends up summoning the Shinigami in the battlefield where the tournament of the Chuunin exams occur, in front of everybody in the village, and essentially says to him, "People aren't dying because the Kyuubi is stuck inside of you. I can't die because the two halves of the Kyuubi's chakra inside of me aren't merging properly without him, but give me damn near godly levels of healing. Here's the deal: You give him back to me, and break the seal on my belly, now, or so help me I will jump in your mouth and see what happens when the whole thing is inside of you."

He wins, and the Shinigami places the Kyuubi back in Naruto's belly. Before the seal is restored, he quickly makes two blood clones of himself, uses his parent's remains as a DNA catalyst, and forces their soul into the empty shells he created... bringing them truly back to life, no strings attached.

At the back of the crowd, his original blood clone watches... The one and only true copy of him... before he walks away and begins his new life.
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That was....Amazing.
Fair play dude, I am very inclined to read the full thing now.
Very much looking forward to reading it all.
I like that you've actually gone into depth with the potential plot holes, well done dude.
I applaud you.

Picture related (I made it when I was still at school a long while back)
User avatar #97 to #96 - pull [OP]
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Wow, you drew this? Very nice. Might try to commission you to do some fan art for my characters lol
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Sure.
If you gave me a detailed idea of what you wanted I could give it a shot.

Another picture I drew, Mustang from Full Metal Alchemist and Link from Legend of Zelda.
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**** yeah for Mustang.

But yeah, the kid with short hair. I imagined him to be every bit as badass as Minato, but he dresses in a Buddhist monk's robe, looks about 40 or so. This is how I described him in the story... "Naruto and Hinata turned quickly to see a middle-aged man ambling through the sand-infested scrub grass. He was dressed as a monk in black robes lined with ochre and carried a staff with a ring on the top. His short grey hair was black, but flecked with grey near his hairline. Heavy eyelids concealed dark grey eyes, so heavy that less than half of his iris could be seen."
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Okay, so this is what I have gathered thus far.
- Buddhist Monk Robe (Black and lined with ochre)
- Around the age of 40 or so
- Short black/grey hair with obvious grey flecks near the hair line (Edges of his hair or the actual lines on his head?)
- Dark grey eyes (Heavy eyelids, presumably dull looking?)
- Staff with a ring on top (What sort of staff? A staff where the ring is entwined with the ring as if it was a real branch or attached as if it was forged as part of the staff?)
Am I close to the visualization?
Also, do you think you would be able to find a rough look of what you want him to look like? Either with a real life picture from google or maybe just a quick scribble on paint?
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Yup, you're right. You can model it after this monk here, but without the hat. I'm kinda imagining him as about what Chow Yun Fat looks like. The staff should look like this, but perhaps thicker? And the robes keep the same shape, but only the hemline is ochre, about six to nine inches deep, with the interior kept black.

What do you think?
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Hmm.
I could give it a try, I wouldn't have it done today (It is currently 5:37 in the afternoon here in cheery ol' Britain).
I may have it finished tomorrow or the next day as I expect this is going to be a trial and error job.
Either way, I will give it a shot.
I'll post it on your Profile periodically so you can see the progress and criticise it as you see fit.
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Feel free to fudge on the details as much as you want, though. I'd really like to see where you go with this.
User avatar #103 to #102 - pull [OP]
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Are you serious??? Dude, if you do this, you'd better hope you have a Deviant Art page set up. Because when my next chapter goes up, you WILL get a massive influx of viewers.
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Haha, I may make a Deviant Art, I dunno.
But yeah, I will make this for you dude.
I remember the last Fan Fiction I made some art for, it was my buddy from school a long while ago, we were sort of helping each other out on it.
I actually now have a character somewhere he made for me, I felt so special :3
I think that was on my old Deviant art actually...I'll try to find it.
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1) Hinata...for reasons
2) Gai, because Taijutsu is ******* awesome and Rock Lee just irritates me
3) Choji, because he's a secret badass

Also, I want to see Unohana Retsu vs. Madara. If you read Bleach recently you'll know why. **** would be cash.
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