Feedback on Lucy please (she's laying). A friend of mine made this and wants to know how he drew leave a comment please thank you.. - no neck - no eyebrows - nose pointing to the wrong direction - eyes and mouth poorly positioned and aligned - hair isn't following the laws of gravity (for ex Feedback on Lucy please (she's laying) A friend of mine made this and wants to know how he drew leave a comment thank you - no neck eyebrows nose pointing the wrong direction eyes mouth poorly positioned aligned hair isn't following laws gravity (for ex
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> hey anon, wanna give your opinion?
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#18 - alleksi
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(08/07/2013) [-]
- no neck
- no eyebrows
- nose pointing to the wrong direction
- eyes and mouth poorly positioned and aligned
- hair isn't following the laws of gravity (for example: the bangs, the string of hair next to her left eye)
- her right elbow is ******.
- the gap between her rib cage and pelvis is possibly a bit too long.
+ the breasts actually follow the laws of gravity and aren't magically squeezed together, well done
+ the shorts are really nice
+ the hips are also well done
opinions:
- don't make her eyes all black and add a more visible glimmer. copy the eyes from the original character design, try to find an "emotion chart" of hers and see how she acts.
- use the hair to emphasize that she's lying down, have it spread up a bit
- face is too round and that combined with the eyes reminds me scarily of danshi koukousei no nichijou for some reason.
- it's not bad, but it ain't a masterpiece
#54 to #18 - yarnag
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(08/15/2013) [-]
naah the rib cage was well done
User avatar #23 to #18 - junkdestroyer
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(08/07/2013) [-]
^ this.
#9 - zombierules
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#33 - ronyx
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(08/08/2013) [-]
This isn't deviant art. Man, **** this ****.
This isn't deviant art. Man, **** this ****.
#38 to #33 - bakawaka
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PUT THAT **** BACK
PUT THAT **** BACK
User avatar #7 - jesuscumjuice
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(08/07/2013) [-]
Her nose is pointing left ,her neck is misplaced,left arm is a toothpick,and face is like an awkward smile.Also the top of the head seems bigger than the bottom.
#5 - benjiii
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#40 - randomwanker
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(08/08/2013) [-]
thank you op I tried to go 24 hours without masturbating and you just ruined it
#41 to #40 - asrial
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Username aside, if you can't go 48 hours without a wank, you might want to get consultation.
User avatar #50 to #41 - randomwanker
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I have to do it every night before going to bed
#36 - mastersaturday
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User avatar #29 - stupidffff
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What is wrong with her breasts? It's like Moses showed up all "AND SEPARATE THAT **** *****" and her breasts parted.
#34 to #29 - anon id: c58bf425
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That's what real breasts do. They get shy and scurry to the woman's armpits when she lying down.
#35 to #34 - stupidffff
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(08/08/2013) [-]
Best response ever. Have some romantically apocalyptic.
#1 - aglet
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(08/07/2013) [-]
You'd do well to push the boobs together, people seem to like that. One eye looks different than the other, but I don't think anyone's looking at her eyes. Other than that, pretty hot. Here, have my thumb.
You'd do well to push the boobs together, people seem to like that. One eye looks different than the other, but I don't think anyone's looking at her eyes. Other than that, pretty hot. Here, have my thumb.
User avatar #17 to #1 - alleksi
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(08/07/2013) [-]
don't listen to this comment
User avatar #53 to #1 - bluenapalm
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(08/09/2013) [-]
So your saying you like fake tits better than real ones? Well... We all have our tastes.
User avatar #3 to #1 - myrolerian
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(08/07/2013) [-]
not sure if you know but its lucy from fairytail and that picture is a cover if im not mistaken and that's how it is on there....besides with they way she is laying down there is no way her tits will be pushed together.
User avatar #22 to #3 - aglet
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(08/07/2013) [-]
I did not know where she was from but phuck physics, push the tits together!
User avatar #30 - dorumon
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(08/08/2013) [-]
In my opinion it is a great drawing. But I think that if she is laying down, some background would be nice, like a bed with sheets would make it great. But otherwise good work.