Feedback on Lucy please (she's laying). A friend of mine made this and wants to know how he drew leave a comment please thank you.. - no neck - no eyebrows - nose pointing to the wrong direction - eyes and mouth poorly positioned and aligned - hair isn't following the laws of gravity (for ex
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Feedback on Lucy please (she's laying)

A friend of mine made this and wants to know how he drew
leave a comment please
thank you

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Submitted: 08/07/2013
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#18 - alleksi ONLINE (08/07/2013) [+] (2 replies)
- no neck
- no eyebrows
- nose pointing to the wrong direction
- eyes and mouth poorly positioned and aligned
- hair isn't following the laws of gravity (for example: the bangs, the string of hair next to her left eye)
- her right elbow is ****** .
- the gap between her rib cage and pelvis is possibly a bit too long.
+ the breasts actually follow the laws of gravity and aren't magically squeezed together, well done
+ the shorts are really nice
+ the hips are also well done
opinions:
- don't make her eyes all black and add a more visible glimmer. copy the eyes from the original character design, try to find an "emotion chart" of hers and see how she acts.
- use the hair to emphasize that she's lying down, have it spread up a bit
- face is too round and that combined with the eyes reminds me scarily of danshi koukousei no nichijou for some reason.
- it's not bad, but it ain't a masterpiece
#9 - zombierules (08/07/2013) [-]
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User avatar #29 - stupidffff (08/08/2013) [+] (2 replies)
What is wrong with her breasts? It's like Moses showed up all "AND SEPARATE THAT **** ***** " and her breasts parted.
#34 to #29 - anonymous (08/08/2013) [-]
That's what real breasts do. They get shy and scurry to the woman's armpits when she lying down.
#33 - ronyx (08/08/2013) [+] (1 reply)
This isn't deviant art. Man, 						****					 this 						****					.
This isn't deviant art. Man, **** this **** .
#38 to #33 - bakawaka (08/08/2013) [-]
PUT THAT 						****					 BACK
PUT THAT **** BACK
User avatar #7 - jesuscumjuice (08/07/2013) [-]
Her nose is pointing left ,her neck is misplaced,left arm is a toothpick,and face is like an awkward smile.Also the top of the head seems bigger than the bottom.
#5 - benjiii (08/07/2013) [-]
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#40 - randomwanker (08/08/2013) [+] (2 replies)
thank you op I tried to go 24 hours without masturbating and you just ruined it
#41 to #40 - asrial (08/08/2013) [-]
Username aside, if you can't go 48 hours without a wank, you might want to get consultation.
User avatar #36 - mastersaturday (08/08/2013) [-]
"Your friend"....
Getting there.

Her head is a little oddly-shaped. It bulges out a little too much up top. Her arms look... strange. Like a ball and socket at the elbow, eliminate those lines to fix that. The main issue is with her breasts though - they look like they're in zero gravity just floating. Study breasts a bit to get a feel for their physics. They're like sacks of water.
#1 - aglet (08/07/2013) [+] (4 replies)
You'd do well to push the boobs together, people seem to like that. One eye looks different than the other, but I don't think anyone's looking at her eyes. Other than that, pretty hot. Here, have my thumb.
You'd do well to push the boobs together, people seem to like that. One eye looks different than the other, but I don't think anyone's looking at her eyes. Other than that, pretty hot. Here, have my thumb.
User avatar #3 to #1 - myrolerian (08/07/2013) [-]
not sure if you know but its lucy from fairytail and that picture is a cover if im not mistaken and that's how it is on there....besides with they way she is laying down there is no way her tits will be pushed together.
User avatar #31 - thesoulless (08/08/2013) [+] (1 reply)
Her face should be angled at π/2 radians to her head, rather than 7π/12
Also, if she's lying down, her air should reflect that a bit more.
Her right arm also makes her look like she's Samus Aran or something.
User avatar #32 to #31 - thesoulless (08/08/2013) [-]
Other than that it's pretty well done. Much better than I can do.
User avatar #30 - dorumon (08/08/2013) [-]
In my opinion it is a great drawing. But I think that if she is laying down, some background would be nice, like a bed with sheets would make it great. But otherwise good work.
User avatar #28 - werewulft (08/08/2013) [-]
titties but i like juvia better though good skills though.
User avatar #27 - uncookedspaghetti (08/08/2013) [-]
Not bad but Mira is better.
User avatar #26 - arreatface (08/07/2013) [-]
aint that bad
#21 - anonymous (08/07/2013) [-]
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#20 - anonymous (08/07/2013) [-]
If you have to copy please make it better next time...
User avatar #19 - Maroon ONLINE (08/07/2013) [-]
The only thing I'm gonna say is that her eyes are too low. Human eyes are at the middle of the head top to bottom. You have them set at like 2/3 of the way down.
User avatar #6 - valentines ONLINE (08/07/2013) [-]
It looks more like Nami....but its good
User avatar #4 - arwendar ONLINE (08/07/2013) [-]
Position of eyes, mouth and nose are off.
Ass is a bit too big, never thought I'd be saying that...
And one of the arms is a bit too scrawny.
Other than that: fantastic job!
User avatar #2 - ravemouse ONLINE (08/07/2013) [-]
I'd say her face looks like it's meant to looking slightly right but the face shape is looking forward
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