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awake mothersday when i was in gr 3
ego to school
eget to math class
ebest subject
Merst kid waiting unlock door
sschool can' t afford separate desks so students share long tables
asit in back. no friends
skids file in nobody sits next to me at my table
tbell rings. i' m alone
agirl walks in late. cutest girl Ne ever seen
eonly empty seats left are at my table
esome seats at my table are not right next to me
Ashe sits next to me anyway
etoo nervous to look at her
esters down at blank notebook
seconds pass
Ashe sends a sideways kick untestable at me
look up at her
ahuge eyes
allmost perfect complexion some freckles
acute little nose
Ashe smiles at me
ewe don' t talk rest of class until bell rings
Ashe says "cya" and leaves
enext math class
Ashe is late
exits next to me again
edness' t wait 20 seconds: kicks me right away
dor/ t look up but say "hi"
asit through class until bell rings she says cya
ffirst test coming up
acreage complex plan to help her cheat on test to impress her
atest day comes
await for herto look like she needs help
Ashe looks fine whole test. bell rings
enext class tests are marked
eonly person who beat my score is her
emy amazement breaks the ice and we start talking
enext few months we get close
uguys start moving toward back of class. sitting closer's her
pstart to feel jealous
etry out for Kickboxing team to impress hurwitz bravery
too hard and qualify fordham
enou commited to Kickboxing team
Ashe says Fm turning into brawn
ego to coach ask to quit team
ehe thinks i lack confidence
egis's me peptalk
walk away confused. still on team
ewan first match
upraised by peers
Merst time she is ever early for math.
site other side of class
late and don' t see where she is until mathclass
tbell rings, she leaves without glancing back
ewe don' t talk rest oficer
ffirst two years of highschool go by hast
pstart meeting firends through Kickboxing
ehave less time for studying
stalk and act obnoxious during class
abrades steadily decline from ". l‘ E. + to C' s
estilo keeping eye on her
equality
aboard bus for trip to tournament
eeveryone excited en route, hard to sit still
at tornament
elast match: me and last year' s
ewan
ahead back to bus
Scotch has solemn look on face
why
Enter bus
ateam is estate: with tornament outcome
ewan new Kickboxing gear for school
Scotch enters bus
eases meta leave with him
eneus makes my heart stop momentarily
Enter bus
ffriends don" t notice expression on or my face
espega to coach, say i' d rather go back alone
Scotch understands. says he will tell friends news forms
map and start walking to bus station, alone
Easing everything. the time is going
sticking on. everybody' s rushing
igotta get down to the bus stop, gotta catch my bus
see my friends
klicking in the front seat
editting in the back seat
igotta make my mind up
wwhich seat can i take
**** you.
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User avatar #7 - grayrhino ONLINE (01/14/2013) [+] (4 replies)
I was actually wanting a feel in this.

I am so disappointed.....
#28 - krasnogvardiech (01/15/2013) [+] (29 replies)
People who are pissed: Here is a complete story from some glorious gentleman.
#18 - Enternal (01/15/2013) [+] (1 reply)
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#2 - wolfbananabear (01/14/2013) [+] (1 reply)
This just... ******* .. ******* typical... I can't fathom words to express how I'm feeling about this right now.
#24 - Shindagoku (01/15/2013) [+] (2 replies)
<- My reaction when i got to the end.
<- My reaction when i got to the end.
#93 - chubberbrother (01/15/2013) [-]
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User avatar #21 - nevergonnahappen (01/15/2013) [+] (5 replies)
Can...Can we please create a sensible ending together,cause it seemed like a good story up until that point.



I,honestly was looking for a feel.
#68 - sammyjankiis (01/15/2013) [-]
My reaction at end. I wanted a feel :(
My reaction at end. I wanted a feel :(
#65 - felixjarl ONLINE (01/15/2013) [-]
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User avatar #31 - rdangerdash (01/15/2013) [-]
11/9 One of the best I have ever read. Did not see it coming at all. I saw a bunch of other endings that it could have been coming but nothing could have prepared me for that.
#151 - DrollHumor ONLINE (01/15/2013) [-]
How many times have we been over this, brain!?    
Greentext stories never have real endings.
How many times have we been over this, brain!?
Greentext stories never have real endings.
#30 - anonmynous ONLINE (01/15/2013) [-]
This is what I actually read:

>ok kinda interesting
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>wait why am i reading this there is just going to be some terrible punchline
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>OK seriously why am I still reading this?
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>Brain quit it
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> **** .
#20 - hipsophobadon (01/15/2013) [-]
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#29 - waffies (01/15/2013) [-]
This one ya cuntnugget!
#158 - holeymoley (01/15/2013) [-]
my favorite
User avatar #45 - grpeephole (01/15/2013) [-]
I was expecting a conclusion to what happen..

So in my eyes that super cute girl commited suicide. BOOM STORY ENDED.

Im out to much internets
#112 - shazmothree (01/15/2013) [-]
God 						*******					 dammit I really wanted an ending
God ******* dammit I really wanted an ending
#98 - pastelbubblegum (01/15/2013) [-]
I was just starting to develop feels.
#63 - apocalypticburrito (01/15/2013) [-]
NO, i am done
some days you gotta ask "what am i willing to put with do day"
NOT THIS
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