>Clean up your lines, they're too shaky.
>Work on how you draw the body. Exxagerated proportions are fine, but yours are a bit sloppy and uneven.
>Thicken the borders around characters and objects, it helps define them and makes it more appealing.
>Ears...enough said
>The arms are offputting. Hinged or noodly, pick one and stick with it
>Other than those things, it's pretty good.

cant help with the shakyness, i use a mouse, im saving up for a tablet though

as for the arms, yes i am working on that, they do look noodly dont they.

not really sure about ears, gonna have to experiment with that.

You can do something about the lines quite easily. Download paint tool SAI (you get a month free trial). There's a curve line tool that allows for very smooth and consistent linework, even with a mouse

i never really pay attention to that, sometimes ill put visable necks sometimes i wont.

guess ill have to pay more attention from now on

Dude I like the style, go for it.

why thank you.

definitely visible necks, not really anything else

The anon above is right, you should make necks, and noses. That's just my style. But otherwise, you have potential.