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#6129 - electricsheep **User deleted account** (07/03/2012) [-]
I need critical help. My family and friends are impressed with everything I do, and even the ones who could help me just say "it's Good". SO before I put this on DA, could I get constructive comments on things like composition, colours, flow, and general plus /minus stuff?

(BTW, it is Sothe from Fire Emblem)
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User avatar #6192 to #6129 - thehalfanese (07/04/2012) [-]
Certain lines look really pixelated and could be a lot smoother (under his left upper arm). That's really it; looking good otherwise.
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User avatar #6147 to #6129 - derpingherper (07/03/2012) [-]
Overall looks amazingly colored!
Like "threat"said, try to outline it. Also add a bit of shades on his face and arm.
After that, you are good to go!
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User avatar #6131 to #6129 - threat (07/03/2012) [-]
The picture is great, but it looks a little blotted.....try outlining the drawing and itll look awesome :3
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User avatar #6132 to #6131 - electricsheep **User deleted account** (07/03/2012) [-]
Hmmm, okay I see what you mean. The left side could benefit from a harder edge, but the right is dispersed, so it really can't become harder.
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User avatar #6150 to #6132 - moeps (07/03/2012) [-]
the face could use a bit clearer shadows. It looks a bit blurred.
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