this kinda makes me want to die, just looking at it.

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I used to draw like that :) Your anatomy and perspective is quite off, and he's missing the back of the head.
Try watching this video, it helped me: www.youtube.com/watch?v=mtuVE20qnfE

Neck is kinda chick. Face goes out too far from the neck, and is overly round.

i know, i always fuck up my proportions and find a good hand full of things i hate about my own drawings. but i got the intended look out of it dispite how god awful the undershirts lines came out

When you fuck up your proportions, you know what you do?
You erase and redo that part.

ya. i cant ever make a picture i see as perfect but can anyone say the same of them selves. this is one of the few pics that iv ever been happy with dispite the flaws

The way you worded that is very annoying.
Are you using pen?
If not, redo it until it looks perfect. to you.

yes it is pen but my reason to use it is to teach myself to be better so if i make a mistake it is perminant. its actually been helping me improve over my old stuff.
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the pen teaches me to be carfull and thats why i use it. iv inproved quit a bit befor this pic from the pen and it seems to work still.

Okay, try this:
I started to try and learn how to art by drawing things I liked- mostly cartoonish characters, like from Invader Zim. Once I could draw those characters accurately, I moved onto anime characters, as I am an anime fan. Then, I started to make up cross overs or original characters. Use pencil. You can't shade or erase with a pen.
Its probably a really sucky system, and is not advised, but thats all I can say. If you want to do more realistic drawings, try to study how a person ACTUALLY looks. Like from a picture or something.
Remember, Im not a professional or anything, but this worked for me...

bad?