You want destructive criticism.... And I'm an art major... there is no way you'd leave this thread without crying, first.


FIRST THING'S FIRST... NEVER DRAW ANIME AGAIN. It's an absurdly overused style that is the mainstay of somebody who is either new to drawing, or is crappy.

Do just what you think you would, Draw every single piece of hair as an individual strand, then come in later with a kneaded eraser and slightly run areas that have light reflections. You just work piece by piece with it.

Man, that thing sucks! I'm not exactly sure what it is, and what the fuck is wrong with tis hair? Why is one section bald? The triangle nose is just lazy and the adam's apple looks funny. The shoulders are too boxy. Is the shirt supposed to have that long of an opening, or did you not draw a full zipper. Please do not pick up a pencil ever again, you suck!

In all reality though, it is a pretty good drawin. The lines are great.