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User avatar #17854 - herecomesjohnny
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(11/18/2012) [-]
www.mediafire.com/view/?cziij2z91zfond1

so i'm writing a weekly chronicle in a medieval setting, and i just finished the third part that you can read if you want. You don't need to read the previous ones to understand what's happening -it's pretty simple and i'm not satisfied with my previous chapter-

It's pretty short, byt any criticism of any kind is welcome!