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#17805 - theaussiestig
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(11/18/2012) [-]
Hey Art board, I just drew this and I wanted to know if there's anything I need to change before I ink it up?
User avatar #17850 to #17805 - alleksi
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(11/18/2012) [-]
her boobs are defying the laws of physics. when a character is moving forward, her boobs shouldn't also be pointing forwards especially when wearing sports clothing. try making her right boob not so "pointy"

eyes are kinda derpy: her left eye (right from our POV) doesn't seem to be aligned with the rest of the face.

other minor things that I think could need fixing but not exactly mandatory:
making her nose shorter could add some more feminity
her right hand looks very masculine compared to her left hand
shoes look like they're different sizes, make her right shoe smaller
your line work looks very unsure for example the stripes on the pants) and isn't "pointy" enough, they almost look more like tentacles than hair

some of your lines are very smooth, thin and straight yet other lines are very heavy and "really not straight and pretty looking at all". what happened? did you trace the body as an template?
User avatar #17873 to #17850 - theaussiestig
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(11/18/2012) [-]
I use french curves to draw some of my lines, and the pencils I'm using aren't the best. There are some things I try to clean up in this stage, but in some cases it's easier fixing finer details in the inking stage. When I get some time later I could try some changes but I need to get that new mechanical pencil first.