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The Journey/My first Real OC

 
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The Journey/My first Real OC. IF TOO SMALL CLICK TO ELARGE! So this is the first actually good mediocre comic I have made and probably the last but I would grea

IF TOO SMALL CLICK TO ELARGE!
So this is the first actually good mediocre comic I have made and probably the last but I would greatly appreciate feedback on it and anything I could improve on(Like Pixel size being to small/art style crappy or text to hard to read etc). I know this OC sucks but maybe with time I can get better and actually contribute more to the site than just my Vocaroo recordings.

Conscience store
Censored K;
C Tacos
a" Hey Chromy what do
see?
Hitcher bring Captain back in
we might lose our deposit,
r ddidn' t seea _c,
damn thing C 2
The Scottish chick is
about to waste the cum
sock guy, Quick get my
camera Andra!
ammit the gates still locked.
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Submitted: 02/13/2015
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User avatar #1 - ihearcolors [OP](02/13/2015) [+] (3 replies)
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Users mentioned:
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************
Hitcher s arm
captainwow
phanact
chokinandtokin
andra
ChromedDragon
#8 - captainwow (02/13/2015) [-]
Weird, "cum sock guy" was also my name throughout high school.
#6 - zahidlol (02/13/2015) [-]
I will never be popular enough to be in a comic
User avatar #10 to #6 - Seanxone ONLINE (02/14/2015) [-]
Welcome to the club m8
User avatar #7 - payseht ONLINE (02/13/2015) [-]
People are too lazy and will just skip if they have to enlarge. If you're going to exclusively post these here, make each panel a separate picture and upload them separately like a comp. Make sure the text is properly sized.
Artstyle does its job, I guess...
I'm too lazy to enlarge and didn't get a mention to at least motivate me doing it to masturbate my ego, so can't give critic on humor.
Best of luck
-Mum
User avatar #12 - pikethepole (02/14/2015) [-]
Good effort but we all know it can be improved try using the shade tools
#11 - anon (02/14/2015) [-]
Sorry dude, but the quality isn't quite high enough to read the comic
I mean, ************** OC's level of mspaint skills is an absolute minimum dragging its bottom on the line, and you're not really reaching it there
A little more effort on the drawing and it's okay..

Constructive feedback, nothing mean.
User avatar #9 - crazyeyedbioll (02/14/2015) [-]
dem ms paint skillz. nice work tho bro
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